专题10 书面表达12篇（上海专用）（解析版）.docx

专题10书面表达12篇

1．（23-24高二上·上海·期末）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假如你是Jerry，你的朋友Lear准备设计一款智能手机app，可以帮助高中学生学习。他来信征求你的建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

（1）你需要的app的名称和功能；

（2）你需要该app的理由；

（3）你给该app的建议。

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【答案】IneedanAPPtopreventclassslippage.ItscalledStayAwake.ItsmainfunctionisthatwhenIfeelsleepy,theAPPwillautomaticallyissueanalarmtoremindmetoimprovemyattentioninclass.

Moreandmorestudentsaresleepinginclass.Ireallywanttocontrolthisbadhabit,butwefinditdifficulttocontrolourselves.Inordertobetterimproveclassefficiencyandmystate,IneedanAppthatcanfeelheatandbreathandremindmetonottosleepatalltimes.TheAPPshouldbedesignedtobeeasytouse,andhavecomputationalcapabilitiesanddatadisplayfunctionwithoutdisturbingthepeoplearoundme.

IhopeIcanbenefitfromyourinvention.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的朋友Lear准备设计一款智能手机app，可以帮助高中学生学习。他来信征求考生的建议。请考生给他回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

提高：improve→promote

控制：control→contain

有：have→possess

想要做某事：wanttodosth→wouldliketodosth

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：TheAPPshouldbedesignedtobeeasytouse,andhavecomputationalcapabilitiesanddatadisplayfunctionwithoutdisturbingthepeoplearoundme.

拓展句：TheAPPshouldbedesignedtobeeasytouse,havingcomputationalcapabilitiesanddatadisplayfunctionwithoutdisturbingthepeoplearoundme.

【点睛】【高分句型1】ItsmainfunctionisthatwhenIfeelsleepy,theAPPwillautomaticallyissueanalarmtoremindmetoimprove