高中英语续写作文语料库-动作描写 课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项.pptxVIP

续写作文语料库--动作描写

Howtomaketheactiondescriptionmorevivid?1.分解动作--动作链2.具体动词--忌笼统3.配上表情--带情感4.融入心理--重思维

感知:结合语境,如何优化表达?1.Becauseofhislies,shelookedathim.Becauseofhislies,she_________athim.2Withonlytwentysecondsleft,Irantotheline.Withonlytwentysecondsleft,I________________totheline.3.Withonlytwominutesleft,heatehismeal.Withonlytwominutesleft.He_______________hismeal.4.Sheheardhermothersayquietlyasshewalkeddownthehall,Dontwakeyourdadup.Sheheardhermother___________asshe________downthehall,Dontwakeyourdadup...glaredrush/dashedswallowedupwhisperedtiptoed

目录Partone用精准动词代替笼统动词Parttwo用恰当短语代替普通动词Partthree添加介词短语/副词修饰动作Partfour分解动作，形成动作链Partfive动作描写词汇

PartOneChooseAccurateVerbs用精准动词代替笼统动词

generalwords(笼统的词笼统词）walkrunlooksay/talkconcretewords(具体词)chat(闲聊);whisper(耳语)weep/sob(啜泣)bite(咬)chew(咀嚼)swallow(吞下)tiptoe(蹑手蹑脚地走)dash/rush(猛冲)glare(怒视);glance(瞥见);stare(凝视)

PartTwoChooseproperphrases用恰当短语代替普通动词

start/begindecidecryremembertiredseeattractappealto动词动词动词短语动词getdowntodoingmakeuponesmindburstintotearskeepinmindwornoutcatchsightof

PartThree添加介词短语/副词修饰动作

动作描写语料库探究→ThefiercewolfstaredatMacwithits_________________(adj.)teeth.→___________________________(adv.),hejumpedoffthebicycleanddashedintothecar.→Asthehungrywolfwasalmostreachinghim,Macseyeswerewideopen_______________________.(in/with+名词)sharp/bloody/frightening/scary/terribleImmediately/Instantly/Hurriedly/Breathlesslyinfear/panic/horror/shock

PartFour分解动作，形成动作链Actionchains

把动作过程分解成一连串的动作，构造动作链，让你的动作描写既丰富又生动!

举例子：她拥抱了Betty.(失散多年的老朋友）Shedashedforward，gatheredBettyintoherarmsandburstintotears.冲上去--抱住她--流下眼泪--dashforwardhug/gatherherintoherarmsburstintotears分析：动作链有哪些？形成句子：

举例子：他向狗扔了一块肉。形成句子：Hepickedupapieceofmeat,aimedatthedogandthrewittohim.捡起肉瞄准狗扔过去pickupapieceofmeataimatthedogthrowto动作链：

Iputonmycoathurriedl