2025届高三一轮复习公开课读后续写之动作链与动作面+课件.pptxVIP

ContinuousWriting——ActionchainActionscene

LeadinHowcanyouputtheelephantintherefrigerator?Youjustneedtoopenthedoor,puttheelephantinthefridge,andclosethedoor.

Youputtheelephantintherefrigerator.Youopenthedoor,puttheelephantinthefridge,andclosethedoor.Actionchain动作链Whichsentenceismorevivid?ResultingactionMoredetailedandcoherentmicro-actions

Howtobuildactionchains?Breakdowntheresultingactionsintoachainofmoredetailedandcoherentmicro-actionsintimeorder.Part1ActionchainResultingactionachainofmicro-actions①openthedoor②puttheelephantinthefridge③closethedoor

PresentationThegirlhuggedtheboy._____,_______andhuggedhimtightly.Thegirldashedtowardshim,jumpedupandhuggedhimtightly.Part1Actionchain

Thegirldashedtowardshim,jumpedupandhuggedhimtightly.Strategy1：A,BandCPart1ActionchainSuject+actionA,actionBandactionC

Strategy1：A,BandCPart1ActionchainPracticeMr.Beanattemptedtoglanceathisdeskmate’sanswer.Duringtheexam,Mr.bean___________________,____________________hisdeskmate,andattemptedtoglanceathisdeskmate’sanswers.Thinking:Whataretheactionsbeforecheating?lookedaroundslowlymovedtowards

Part1ActionchainPractice1.Keywords:giveanawardspeechHe_____________,_____________andsaid,“Thankyou,mymom.”2.Keywords:reunionofoldfriendsShe_______________and_______________.3.Keywords:encouragementTheteacher_______________,_______________,andsaidsoftly,_______________.4.WhatwouldDaviddowhenhesawabeggarontheroadside?Strategy1：A,BandC

Part1ActionchainPracticeHe____________________,_________________andsaid,“Thankyou,mymom.”1.Keywords:giveanawardspeechglancedatthetrophytookadeepbreathStrategy1：A,BandC

Part1ActionchainPracticeShe______________and_____________________________.2.Keywords:reunionofoldfriendsrantoherfriendthrewherse