读后续写微写作之情绪描写+Ways+of+Describing+Emotions+课件-2025届高三上学期英语一轮复习专项.pptxVIP

读后续写微写作之情绪描写WaysofDescribingEmotionsLearningObjectives:Bytheendoftheclass,youwillbeableto:1.Remembersomeexpressionsrelatedtofeelings.2.Describeone’sfeelingsvividly(生动地)bytechnique“show,don’ttell”3.writethepassagetoshowthefirstdayofyourfeelingsatseniorhigh.

BeforegoingtoschoolArrivingatschoolDuringtheclassAftertheclassexcitedcuriousnervousembarrassedrelaxedconfidentWhat’sMengHao’sfeelings?

Hewasexcited.Hewascurious.Hewasnervous.……Relytoomuchontelling!!!过度依赖陈述

Show！√Tell！×ShutyourreadersoutofthehouseInviteyourreadersintothehouseSheisinlove

“He’splantingatree?”“I’dhelphim,buthesayshehastodothishimself.Iwhispered.lsita…Thewordsstuckinmythroat,andthenextthinglknowhesholdingmyhand,lookingrightintomyeyes.Myheartstopped.Itjuststoppedbeating.Andforthefirsttimeinmylife,Ihadthatfeeling.Liketheworldismovingallaroundyou,allbeneathyou,allinsideyou,andyourefloating.Floatinginmidair.Andtheonlythingkeepingyoufromdriftingawayistheotherpersonseyes.Theyreconnectedtoyoursbysomeinvisiblephysicalforce,andtheyholdyoufastwhiletherestoftheworldswirlsandtwirlsandfallscompletelyaway.VOICEBODYENVIRONMENTFACE

Step1Face+Body+Voice+EnvironmentShow！Donttell！Haveaclearandvividpictureinyourmind.Afaceinfear

FACE:Drawhisface恐惧让他毛发直竖(makeone’shairstandonend)Thefearmadehishairstandonend.他惊恐地瞪大了(wide)双眼。Heopenedhiseyeswideinpanic他脸色变得苍白(pale/white)。Hisfaceturnedpale.

BODY:Makeyourbodymove他感到双腿发软Hefelthislegsturnedtojelly.他全身止不住的颤抖Hetrembleduncontrollably.

VOICE:Makesomenoise.Ifeltsoscaredthatmykneesfeltweak.“什么？”他发出(letout)一声恐怖(terror)的尖叫(scream)。“Whattttt?!”heletoutascreamofterror.

Environment:Giveitasetting(背景)Ifeltsoscaredthatmykneesfeltweak.老师让我们挨个上去自我介绍Theteacheraskedustointroduceourselvesonebyone.

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