读后续写写作讲评：一次惊险的救援，一股友情的力量--高考英语复习写作专项.docx

读后续写写作讲评:一次惊险的救援，一股友情的力量

读后续写

IlivedinasmalltownandIhadthreebestfriends,Danny,Mia,andRubyWelovedtoplaytogetherafterschoolandourfavoritepastimewasflyingcolorfulkitesintheopenfieldnearthelargeoaktree(橡树).

OnesunnySaturday,wemetuptoplay.Weallhadourkitesready,beautifullydecoratedwithbrightcolorsandpatterns.Thewindwasjustright,soitwasaperfectdaytoletourkitessoar(翱翔).Afterawhile,wedecidedtohaveacompetition—whocouldflythekitethehighest.Thefieldechoed(回响)withourjoyfullaughterasweeachtookturns,oureyesgleamingwithanticipation.

However,asIletmykiteflyhighupintothesky,agustofwindblewitoffcourse.Itgottangled(使缠结)inthebranchesofthelargeoaktreethatstoodtallinthefield.Iwasdisappointedbutdetermined.Idecidedtoclimbthetreetorescuemykite.MyfriendslookedatmenervouslyasIstartedmyclimb,thetreetoweringoverthem.

AsIclimbedhigherandhigher,theotherswatchedwithbatedbreath(屏住呼吸).Theywereworriedbutalsoalittleexcited.Afterall,itwasquiteanadventureto?seemeclimbingsohigh.Suddenly,Ifelt?somethingwrong.Iwasstuck!ThebranchIwasstandingon?wasslipperyand?couldntseemtomove.

Myfriendslooked?atmewithwide,scaredeyes.Theydidntknowhowtohelpme.Theyjustshoutedwordsofencouragement,assuringmethatIcoulddoit.

Itriedmybesttomove,butIwasscaredandmyheartwaspoundinghard.Suddenly,Ilostmyfootingandfell!Myfriendsgaspedinshock.Fortunately,Ididntfallfromahighheight,butitwasenoughtohurtmyarmbadly.Icriedoutinpain.MiaandRubyquicklyranovertomewhileDannyrantofetchanadultIwassobbing,myarmthrobbingwithpain.Myfriendsweretherebymyside,comfortingme.

Thetownspeoplesoonarrived.————————————————

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Buttheyfailedtomakemehappybecauseofthepain.————————————————————————————————

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