读后续写：微笑破冰 课件高三上学期英语一轮复习专项.pptx

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ContinuationWriting

Problmes:Solutions:cannotunderstandthetextbeclearabouttheplotjustdonotknowhowtowritedecideonthethemecannotmakesentences......buildupwords,expressions,structuresLead-inQ:Thinkaboutyourproblemsincontinuationwriting?donothaveenoughtimedomoreexercise

Howtoexpressyournervousness?1.Myheartispumpinginmychest.2.Myhandsaresweaty...runmytongueovermyteeth.3.MyfaceturnedredbecauseImverynervous.4.Ihavebutterfliesinmystomach.5....withatremblingvoice.6.Myheartisinhismouth.......

Howtoreadastory?WhoWhyWhatWhenWhere什么时候发生的事情（明确时态）文章有几个主角都是谁主角有什么特点（确定续写不要增加人物）梳理故事线（确定发生了什么事）明确矛盾点（确定续写要解决的问题）在哪里发生的故事（明确续写的发生场域）5W1H

①thestoryline故事山模型storymountainintroduction开端risingactions发展resolution结局（升华）fallingactions解决climax高潮Twolines双线并行②emotionline

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