雅思作文-6.-影响小孩成长的要素.doc

#99:影响小孩成长的要素

Somepeoplethinkthefamilyisthemostpowerfulinfluenceonchildsdevelopment.Others，however,believethatotherthings(television,friends,music,etc.)havebiggereffects.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

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Familyissometimesbelievedtohaveaprofoundimpactonthedevelopmentofchildren,rangingfromcharactertohabits.Iagreewiththisview,althoughsomepeoplethinkenvironmentalfactorscansometimesmakeabiggerdifference.

A家长言传身教?B孩子模仿C成长受影响

解释（A–B）:孩子将父母看做是rolemodel,firsteducator

举例：生活习惯，说话的方式，待人处事

对比：和其他因素接触的时间少，特别是学龄前孩子，影响少

Leadbyexample,childrencopyadults.

Waysoflife,waystheytalk,socialisewithothers,tackleproblems…

Raisequestions,have?doubtsabout,remainskeptical

Manypeoplearguethatparentsplaythemostsignificantroleintheirchildren’sdevelopmentbecauseadultsleadbyexampleandtheirbehaviorcanshapetheirchildren’s.Parentsactasfirsteducators,andchildrentendtoassumethatthebehaviorofadultsisnormallyacceptable.Forexample,childrentendtobehaveinthesamewaysastheirparentsintermsofwaysofliving,stylesofcommunicationandthewaystogetalongwellwithothers.Incontrast,otherfactorsoutsidethefamily,suchasfriendsandthemedia,arelessinfluential,especiallyforpreschoolchildren,astheexposuretothesefactorsislimited.

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A外界的因素B影响他们的自尊心、社会生活、自我认同感C成长受影响

解释（A-B）：小孩会发现自己和同学，媒体里的一些年轻人角色，有更多的共同点，他们会模仿这些人，更好地和同龄人交流，得到同龄人认可

举例：穿身边的人的衣服，听一样的音乐，喜欢一样的明星

Ontheotherhand,opponentsbelievethatotherexternalfactorscanmakeastrongerimpactonyoungergenerationsasthesefactorscanaffectself-esteem,sociallifeandthesenseofidentity.Astheygrowolder,theywillgraduallyrealizetheyhavenumerousattributessimilartotheirpeersandyoungcharactersoffilms;theytendtocopythebehavioroftheirfriendsinordertoadapttothegrouptheybelongto.Theymayhavethesamepreferencesf