2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+一块巧克力引发的道德挣扎之旅+课件.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习一块巧克力引发的道德挣扎之旅1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Ihavealwaysbeenfondofallsortsofchocolates,especiallybitterbakingchocolate.Mymotherhadpurchasedabarofit,andsomehow,Icouldn’tgetitoutofmymind.Iwasassistingmyfatheronthefarm.Justthen,anideastruckme.Icouldcutoffachunk(厚块)ofthechocolate.Mymotherwouldsurelynoticeit,butbeforeshediscoveredwhohaddoneit,IcouldadmitthatIhadtakenit.Probably,Imightnotevenreceiveaspanking(打屁股).Iwaiteduntilmymotherwentouttofeedthechickens.Then,ItoldmyfatherthatIwouldgoinsideforsomewater.ItookdownthebarandwasabouttocutitwhenIheardmymothercomingback.Ireactedswiftly,slippingthechocolateintomypocketandrunningout.Beforereturningtohelpmyfather,Iwenttothebarnandhidthechocolatethere.4

续写原文Onmywayout,Icalmeddownabitandcouldthinkmoreclearly.ItoldmyselfthatIhadn’tactuallystolentheentirebarofchocolatebecauseIonlyintendedtotakeasmallpiece.IfIputthewholebarback,Iwouldn’thavedoneanythingwrong.Ialmostdecidedtoputitallback.Butjustthinkingaboutthatchocolatemademytonguealmosttasteitssmoothbitterness.IstartedthinkingthatifIslicedabouthalfaninchofftheendwithasharpknife,mymothermightnevernoticeit.Suddenly,Irememberedwhatmyfatherhadsaidonce—someofthefamilymoneywasminebecauseIhadhelpedearnit.Whywouldn’titbeokaytothinkthatthebarofchocolatehadbeenboughtwithmyownmoney?Thatseemedtofixeverything.5

段首句Paragraph1：ThatnightIcouldn’tsleep,wonderinghowIcouldmakeitsecretly.Paragraph2：Bymoonlight,justasIwasabouttocutit,myfathersaid.“Son!”6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8文章讲述了“我”一直钟情于苦烘焙巧克力，看到母亲买的巧克力后便心生贪念。在帮父亲干农活时，“我”想趁母亲喂鸡时偷切一块巧克力，可刚拿到还没来得及切就被母亲回来打断，“我”匆忙将巧克力藏到谷仓。之后“我”内心开始挣扎，先是安慰自己只拿一小块不算偷，后来又想用父亲说自己挣钱的话来合理化拿巧克力的行为，在欲望与道德之间来回拉扯，不知最终是否会真的偷吃巧克力，陷入了纠结的境地。

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