2023年4月22日雅思考试机经·写作 - social value lost.docx

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Nowadays,mostcountriesimprovethestandardoflivingthrougheconomicdevelopment.Butsomesocialvaluesarelostasaresult.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthephenomenonoutweighthedisadvantages?

这篇题目首先烤鸭们要看清楚题目要求，它问的是你认为这个现象是否优点胜过缺点，那么咱们两个主体段基本就是要对这个现象的优缺点进行展开和论述，从而找到谁能带来更重更深的影响了。

题目所给事实为——当今很多国家通过经济发展改善民生（生活质量），但是一些社会价值观却丢失了。那么优点显然就是要说生活质量改善了能带来哪些好处，这个部分比较好写；但是价值观丢失会有哪些弊端就会比较抽象，所以可能比较难展开。建议碰到这样的题目时，各位烤鸭先将抽象词（如这里的社会价值观）具象化，可以自己先列举一些传统的价值观，比如尊老爱幼，相敬如宾，不孝有三等等，那么这些价值观所带来的危害就比较好想了。

这里给大家带来一篇注重展开缺点的文章，以供参考。

Itisnoteworthythattheanumberofnationshaveamelioratedcitizen’slivingstandardthrougheconomicprosperityatthecostoflosingtraditionalsocialvalues.Iamfirmlyconvincedthatthedrawbacksofthetrendoverweighthebenefitsinthelongterm.

Aboveall,itisirrefutablethatboostingeconomyisworkableandessentialtoimprovepeople’squalityoflife.Thedominantindicatoroflifequalityisfinance.Toputitinanotherway,astrongeconomyguaranteessocialwelfareandeliminateinequalitytosomedegreesothattheresidents’materialprovisionisperceptiblethankstofreeeducation,healthcareandincreasingincome.Incontrast,withoutthestrongsupportoffiscalrevenueandsteadyincome,inhabitantswouldhavetosufferinpovertyandgovernmentsareattheriskofbeingoverthrown.

Nonetheless,socialvalueshavehadtotakeabackseattobusinessduringthecourseofeconomicgrowthinmanycontexts.Itsinfluenceisobvious,detrimentalandfar-reaching.People,theyounggenerationinparticular,arebecomingsogreedythattheyhavenotimeforothers,followingtheglobalmain-streamculturewhichiscrowdingouttheirdomesticmoralvalues,andtotallyoccupiedbytheirjobs,makingitimpossibletostrikeabalancebetweenworkandfamily.Undertheseunpleasantcircumstances,peoplewillbelesscooperativeintheworkplaceastheyusedtobeinearliertimes,lessresponsibleforfamilydutieslikehavingan