Day 2【读后续写】暑假晨背晚练—语言描写 “漂亮地说”.docx

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【读后续写】暑假晨背晚练—语言描写Day2

“漂亮地说”

晨背——素材积累

在对话标签中加入语气、嗓音、情感以及伴随动作，让你的描写更生动传神。

对话＋语气（tone）

①ina/an+形容词+tone

②inatoneof+名词

例句：

“YoumustbeAnnie,”hesaidinafriendlytone.

“Iwouldloveto,”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.

“Idon’twantto,”saidEmilyinatoneofimpatience.

“NoIdidn’t,”hesaidinalowtone.

对话＋嗓音（voice）

ina/an+形容词+voice

例句：

“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.

“Idon’tknowwhatyoumean,”saidFraninaquaveringvoice.

Hecalledoutinaloudvoice.

Thewomanatthedeskgreetedhiminaboredvoice.

对话＋介词短语/副词

①介词短语

in:

insurprise/shock/sorrow/horror/anger

with:

withdelight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/caution/care/patience/certainty

②副词

firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully

例句：

“We’renotintrouble!”Ishoutedwithjoy.

“Ihateyou!”shescreamedinanger.

“Isittrue?”hewhisperedwithastonishment.

“I’vebeenwaitingforyou,”shesaidwithasmile.

“Getoverherethisinstant!”Davidcalledfiercely.

“Itisn’tfair!”heexclaimedangrily.

“Youaremyhero!”Kyliesaidaffectionately.

“Ifeellikeyou’reabandoningme,”sherespondedbitterly.

对话＋伴随动作

“Nobodycouldunderstandme!”Andysobbed,buryinghisfaceinhishands.

Thefarmerpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,“It’syoursnow.”

Withherheaddown/Withtearsinhereyes,shesaid,“Sorry.”

“Hi,Sandy.I’msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”Catherinemurmuredanapology,herfacereddening.

“Wanttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina’shand.

Thewomaninthecarjumpedout,screaming,“Youidiot!Whydidn’tyoulookwhereyouweregoing?”

晚练——素材运用

运用晨读板块的四个对话描写技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。

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