Module5+Look+after+yourself+作文讲义 外研版英语九年级下册+.docxVIP

初中作文外研社九下M5Lookafteryourself

外研社九下M4Lookafteryourself

本模块的话题是“健康生活”。学生在具体的写作中应做到以下几点:

1.能够介绍自己健康的生活习惯,制定健康生活计划;

2.能够从饮食健康、生活作息、乐观心态等方面提出有关健康生活的建议。

作文1：

为了宣传6月6日“全国爱眼日”,你校英语报《校园周报》正在组织征文活动。请你根据提示,结合实际生活写一篇题目为“Howtoprotectoureyes”的英语短文投稿。词数80~100。

提示:

1.眼睛的重要性;

2.保护眼睛的措施。

基础版本：

Asisknown(众所周知),eyesarethewindowofourmind（心灵的窗户）.Withoureyes,wecanseethebeauties=beautifulviews?aroundus.Therefore,itisveryimportanttoprotectoureyes.

Therearesomethingsweshoulddotoprotectoureyes(引入我们要给出的建议).?Firstly,weshouldhaveagoodhabit.Trynottoreadinbedorinabus,which?canbeveryharmfultooureyes.Secondly,?agoodrestalsoplaysanimportantpartin（起着重要的作用）?protectingoureyes.So?wearesupposedto（应该）?getenoughsleepandavoidworkingforalongtime.Lastly,?eatingtherightfoodhelps.Itisadvisable/agoodidea?toeatvegetables,suchastomatoesandcarrots.

Hopefully,everyonecanfollowmyadvice?andhaveagoodeyesight(视力).

分析：这篇文章结构清晰，用词还不错，适合同学们好好学习，因为这样的文章好模仿，同学们也能够达到这样的水平。

进阶版本：

Itiswidelyacknowledgedthat(普遍承认的是)?eyesserveas（作为）?themostimportantpartforustosensethebeautyoftheworld（感知世界的美丽）.However,nowadayspeopleareso?busyusingtheireyesforworkandfunthat?theyforgettotakegoodcareofthem.Itishightimethat（是时候...）?weprotectedoureyes.

Herearesometipsforagoodpairofeyes.Firstofall,?formingagoodhabit(养成良好的习惯)?benefits（有助于）?oureyes.Thus,?wearenotsupposedtoreadinbedorinabus.?Besides，?itisofsignificantimportance?togetsufficient/enough?restforoureyes.Don’tuseyoureyesforalongtimeandlookatgreenstuffs(物品)?whenfeelingtired.Lastbutnotleast,itishighlyadvisabletohaveabalanceddiet,whichcancontributeto(有助于)?agoodeyesightbyeatinglotsofvegetables.

Hopefully,myadvicehelpsandeveryonecanalwayshaveagoodeyesighttofeelthebeautyoftheworld.

作文2：

[2021·江苏宿迁改编]公众健康日(7月7日)旨在倡导“全民健康,快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高,健康越来越受