中考英语写作思路--生活的改变.docxVIP

中考英语写作思路--生活的改变

某英文报正开展“Ourlifehaschangedforthebetter”征文竞赛，请你投稿，从下表所列的几个方面描述过去和现在美好生活的变化，并谈谈你的感受。

Inthepast

Now

Livingcondition

smallhouse,…

comfortablehouse,…

Leisure(休闲)activity

swimintheriverorsea,fewbooks,...

swimintheswimmingpool,morebooks,...

注意：

（1）短文中必须描述表格中所列的内容，可适当发挥；

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息；

（3）词数：80—100，短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

首句：Ourlifehasdevelopedrapidly.

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基础版本：

Ourlifehasdevelopedrapidly.?People’slivingconditionshaveimprovedalot.Inthepast,mostpeoplelivedinsmallhouseswithno?airconditioners（空调）.Butnowtheyliveinbighouseswhich?aremorecomfortable.Andpeoplenowhavemoreleisureactivities（休闲活动）.Before,theyswamonlyintheriverorsea.Now?theycanplayinthepoolwithwarmwater.Forchildren,theyusedto(过去常常)?havefewbookstoread,buttheycanenjoymorebooksnow.?Communicationsarebecomingeasierandquicker,aspeopleusemobilephones,andcomputersinsteadofwritingletters.

Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,ourlifeisbecomingbetterandpeopleareleadingamorecomfortable?andcolorful?life.We’reveryhappyandproudtoliveinourcountry.

优秀词组：

livingconditionshaveimproved-生活条件得到了改善

moreleisureactivities-更多的休闲活动

usedtohavefewbookstoread-过去常常没有多少书可读

communicationsarebecomingeasierandquicker-通讯变得更加容易和快捷

insteadofwritingletters-代替写信

developmentofthesociety-社会的发展

leadingamorecomfortableandcolorfullife-过上更加舒适和多彩的生活

进阶版本：

Ourlifehasdevelopedrapidly.?People’s?livingcondition?haveimproved?significantly.Inthepast,?mostpeopleresided=lived?insmallhouseswithoutairconditioners.Nowadays,theyliveinspacious(宽敞的)/big?homesthataremuchmorecomfortable.Additionally,peoplenowenjoy?awiderrangeof=more=various?leisureactivities.Before,theycouldonlyswiminriversorthesea.Now,theycanswiminpoolswithwarmwater.

Forchildren,