备战2024年高中学业水平考试英语真题分类汇编 专题08 改错（短文改错+单句改错） （原卷版）.pdfVIP

专题改错

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短文改错

1.（2022.贵州）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，

每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

1.

只允许修改处，多者（从第处起）不计分。

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DearSir/Madam,

Learningourschoolisgoingtoholdansummercampduringthevacation,I’mreallyinterestedonit.Thereis

somanywonderfulcourses,includinggardening,cooking,self-defensebutnursing,whichareallsoveryusefulto

usstudents.

Now,Ihavedecidedapplyforthecookingcourse.Iwanttolearninghowtocookdeliciousfoods.Besides,

withtheknowledgeofcooking,Icanhelpmyparentcooksupper,whichwillmakethemhappily.I’dappreciateit

ifyoucouldbeofferedachancetojointhecamp.

Yours,

LiHua

2.（2022.山西）Tomhadainterestingdreamlastnight.Inthedreamhetookpartinarace.Atfirst,hecouldnot

torunveryfastandfellbehind.Sohedidn’tloseheartandkeptrunning.Allthestudentbegintocheerhimon,

“Comeon!”Hewassoencouragingthatheranfasterandfastertillhecaughtupalltheotherrunners.Finally,he

wontherace.Hefeltveryproudly.Manyofhisclassmategatheredaroundandcongratulatedhimonhissuccess.

Theyeventhrewherupintotheair.Justatthattimehewokeupandfoundhimselfstillinbed!Whatinterestingthe

dreamwas!

3.（2021.广西）LastSunday,IvisittheCityZoowithmysister.Ittookushalfahourtogettherebybus.Firstwe

wenttoseethetigers.Theywasverystrong.ThenwearrivedattheElephantYard.Wewereluckybecauseofwe

hadachancetotouchtheelephants.Whenwegotclosetothem,wewerefrightening.However,theelephantswere

friendlytowe.Soonourfeardisappeared.Afterlunch,wewentthePandaHouse.Wesa