专题10 书面表达（满分范文18篇）（解析版）.docx

专题10书面表达（满分范文18篇）

1．（23-24八年级上·上海浦东新·期末）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“_______BringsMeHappiness”（以“……带给我快乐”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

在你的生活中，什么给你带来快乐？请你谈谈看法并说明理由。

_______BringsMeHappiness

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【答案】例文

ReadingBringsMeHappiness

Mylifeisfullofhappinessbecauseofreading.Itbringsmealotofknowledgeaswellasplentyofimprovement.Besides,readingcanreducemytimeonwatchingTVandplayingcomputergames.Icanspendmoretimeonmysubjects.What’smore,readingisalsoextremelynecessaryinmystudylife,withwhichIcanmakegreatprogress.Allinall,readinghasbroughtmesomuchhappinessthatIcanhardlystopreading.Istronglyrecommendyoutoreadmorebooksandgetmoreusefulinformation.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：以“……带给我快乐 ”为题，谈谈自己的看法及理由，注意行文连贯，无语法错误。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开篇点题，引出下文；

第二步，具体阐述对其看法及带来快乐的原因；

第三步，总结，提出建议。

[亮点词汇]

①becauseof因为

②aswellas也

③what’smore而且

[高分句型]

①Besides,readingcanreducemytimeonwatchingTVandplayingcomputergames.（and并列结构）

②Allinall,readinghasbroughtmesomuchhappinessthatIcanhardlystopreading.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）

2．（23-24八年级上·上海崇明·期末）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“AValuable(宝贵的adj.)Lesson”.

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