2025届高考英语二轮复习之书面表达历险类续写课件(共29张PPT).ppt.pptxVIP

历险类续写;登山篇;;写作整理;历险类语料整理;句型翻译;救火篇;火灾类历险语料;续写小练;Aboutahalf-milebehindourMinnesotafarmlayapond.Insummer,mybrotherHarryandIwouldrunthroughastandofoaktreestoskipstonesthere.Thepondworeacollarofblackmud.Itwasnotaplaceforswimming.

Inlatesummer,thepondwouldbecoveredbyagreenandbubblyscum（起泡的浮渣）.Sometimesastrong,unpleasantsmellrosefromit.Westayedaway.

Whenwintercame,thepondwasonceagainaninvitingplace.Onedaywhenicecoveredit,Harrysaidtome,“Trywalkingacross.”

Theicelookedsolid.Nowatershowedthroughit,butIhesitated.“Goahead.”Harryurged.“Tryit.You’relighterthanIam.Iftheiceholds,wecanrunandslidecarefullyonit.It’llbefun.”IwantedtopleaseHarry,andIthoughtaboutthefunofalongslideontheice.Ibegantoslideacrossthepond.

Inthemiddleofthepond,theicegavewaywithasuddencrack!Istretchedoutmyarms.ThenextthingIknewIwashangingontotheedgeofaholeintheicebyarmsoutstretchedontheice.FrommyshouldersdownIhunginicywater.Ithoughtofthebottomofthepond.Iknewitwouldbeblackandawfuldownthere,fullofmudandmayberottingcreatures.

Itriedtoclimboutofthehole,butwhenIgotakneeontheice,itbrokelikewindowglass.AgainandagainItriedtogetout.Againandagaintheicebrokeintopieces.Theholewidened.Iwaswearingacoatofheavymaterial.Asitbecamecompletelywet,itdraggedmedown.Iwastiredofthestruggleandrestedwithmyarmsstretchedoutontheice.

IlookedatHarryonshore.Heseemedrootedtothespot.“Ican’tgetout!”IscreamedwhenIcaughtsomebreath.

Paragraph1:Harryturnedandranfromthepond.

Paragraph2:ThemomentIcrashedthroughthekitchendoor,sobbing,mumrushedover.;审题;;;;;心情;衔接;结尾;Para.1

Heturnedandranfromthepond.

Myheartached,tearsstreamingdownmycheekswhenstaringathisfamiliarfigureoutofsight.

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