书面表达技巧课件.ppt

书面表达

一、学生失分的原因

1．?由于字乱而失分。

以2002年的考题为例

Wetookallthethingsweneeded.Forexample,food,map,compass,flashlight,first-aidkitandsoon.

Weshouldgotothefeath.Butariverinfrontoftheforest.Sowemustswimmedandputourbagsonapieceofwood.

;Whenweintheforest,wecouldn’tfindoutthewaytooutoftheforest.Soweusedthecompassandthemap.Finallywegotoutoftheforest.

Atthenight,wearrivedatthecompsite.(10分)

下面这篇作文书写时字体潦草，猜一猜它得了多少分。

;;Werealizedthedirectioneasily.Afteralongwalking,wegotthecampsiteintheevening.WeheldafireandIcookedthesupperwhileLiMingheldthetent.

;2.文章结构而失分

a/不要认为使用长句，复句就是好文章。

例文:LiMingandIstartedoffwhenthesunwasrisingfromtheeast,singinghappily,withourcompass,camp,bread,map,light,matches,knife,clothes,flashlightandfirst-aidkitinourbagsandlookedforwardtothehardtrainingwehadprepareforalongtime.

?

?

;;whereIwasinchargeofsettingupthecampwhileLiMingmadeafireandcookedourdinner.Believeitornot,itwasthemostdeliciousmealI’veeverhad!

Words:132

Sentences:6

Wordspersentence:22

;b/杂乱无章，没有逻辑性。

例如：

Thenarrowpathledusintoaforest,andverysonwefindourselvessurroudedbytreesthatsoaredintothesky,theirthickleavesblockingalmostallthesunlightandthusmakingthedayhalfnight.Wehelpeachother’shandandwalkedtowardwhatwebelievedwest,yetanhourlater,werealizedwehadbeencirclingaroundthesameplace.Welostourway.

;C/丢失要点

二、对策

1．背诵是个好方法

2.基本句型的训练

1/主语+谓语

2/主语+系动词+表语（adj./n）

3/主+谓+宾;4/主+谓+双宾语

5/主+谓+宾+宾补

6/Therebe…

3.习作指导

一、抓四个环节

1．明确要求

2．列出要点

3．扩写成文

;4．查漏补缺

二、注意两个写作技巧

1．用词造句要扬长避短

①IspenttwothousandyuanonthecolourTVset．

②IspenttwothousandyuaninbuyingthecolourTVset．

③ThecolourTVsetcostmetwothousandyuan．

④TwothousandyuanwasspentonthecolourTVset．

⑤IpaidtwothousandyuanforthecolourTVset．

⑥Iused