2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+矿洞救援：生死一线的兄弟情+课件.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习矿洞救援：生死一线的兄弟情1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Steve,21,wasleadingasmallteamintoanabandoned(废弃的)minenearParadisePines,California.Withhimwerehis19-year-oldbrotherAllen,andafishingfriend,32-year-oldBobbyErler.Afteracoupleofhoursofexploring,Stevesuddenlyfelttheearthgivewayunderhim.Thedrainageshaft(排水井)!Hisfingersclawedhelplesslyatthewetsoilashefell.Hewasfallingintodarkness,hisbodystrugglingagainstthewallsoftheshaft.20feetaway,Allenheardaloudcry.“I’mclimbingdown,”hetoldBobby.Withhistorch(手电筒)underhisarm,Allenslidrapidlydownthepipe.“I’mcoming,Steve!”heyelledseveraltimes.Noanswer.AsAllenslidtowardsthebottomofthemineshaft,hesawStevefloatingfacedowninthewater.HeslippedhisarmsroundSteveandpattedhimontheback.WatercameoutofSteve’smouthcontinuously.4

续写原文“I’mgoingtodie,right?”Stevesaidinaweakvoice.“Noway,”Allensaid.“Bobby’sgoingforhelp.”At3:20pm,Bobbysteppedthroughthedoorofthelocalfirestation,amileandahalffromthetopofthecanyon(峡谷).“Myfriends.Trapped,”hesaid,outofbreath.“LastChanceMine.Youhavetohurry!”Onehundredmilesaway,BobTrussell’sphonerangat5pm.LeaderoftheLassenCountySearchandRescueTeam,Trussell,44,hadtheonlyteaminnorthernCaliforniatrainedtoleadminerescues.“I’llpulltogethermyteam,”hesaid,“butit’lltakesometimetogetthere.”Anhourlater,hewasleadingalineofsixtruckstowardsParadisePines.Suddenly,Stevefellunconscious(不省人事的).Allenwonderedhowlongtheycouldholdon.5

段首句Paragraph1：SuddenlyAllensawsomethingshiningabovethem.Paragraph2：Stevewasrushedtohospitalatonce.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8文章讲述了史蒂夫带领团队在废弃矿洞探险时掉进排水井，弟弟艾伦不顾危险下去营救。艾伦发现史蒂夫脸朝下浮在水中，设法让他吐出积水。与此同时，鲍比去消防局求助，救援队随后赶来。在等待救援的过程中史蒂夫失去意识，最终被救出送往医院。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强