读后续写+捕捉和照应可续写点+课件+高考英语一轮复习.pptx

那少女披着一袭轻纱般的白衣，犹似身在烟中雾里，看来约莫十六七岁年纪，除了一头黑发之外，全身雪白，面容秀美绝俗，只是肌肤间少了一层血色，显得苍白异常。杨过抬起头来，与她目光相对，只觉这少女清丽秀雅，莫可逼视，神色间却是冰冷淡漠，当真是洁若冰雪，也是冷若冰雪，实不知她是喜是怒，是愁是乐。;Criteria

第五档：（21-25分）

在内容上，续写故事首先要“与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理”，续写的每一段要与所给原文融洽，同时续写的每一段要紧贴所给首句的线索来写。

;读后续写微探

----捕捉和照应续写点;可续写点（continuationpoints)：

一篇完整的文章中，作者通常会围绕(revolvearound)某个主题来写，在篇首,篇中或篇末设置伏笔(ahintforeshadowinglaterdevelopmentsinastory)，这些统称为可续写点。

;捕捉和照应续写点;阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

OneweekendinJuly,?Jane?andherhusband,?Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,Imgoingtofindabetterspotforustocampand?walked?away.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehad?climbed?toahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

Tom!shecried.Help!

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoa?stream.?Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.

Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janehearda?helicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitim