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转换成过去分词短语01例1：IfIamgivenachancetostudyabroad,Iwillnothesitatetograspit.02优化：Givenachancetostudyabroad,Iwillnothesitatetograspit.03分析：条件状语从句的主语与主句的主语一致，从句主谓之间又是被动关系，故可将该从句转换成过去分词短语作状语，这样句子结构更加紧凑，表达也更加简单。04分析：原句中的目的状语从句转换成不定式短语作状语，这样句子结构更加紧凑，表达也更加简单。04优化：Wemustequipourselveswithknowledgeandskillssoastogetthecompetitiveadvantageinthefuturejob-hunting.03转换成不定式短语01例1：Wemustequipourselveswithknowledgeandskillssothatwecouldgetthecompetitiveadvantageinthefuturejob-hunting.02转换成分词独立结构优化：Withoneofmyparentsbeinglaidoff,myfamilycan’tpossiblyaffordallmyexpensesatcollege.例1：Becauseoneofmyparentsislaidoff,myfamilycan’tpossiblyaffordallmyexpensesatcollege.分析：原因状语从句的主语与主句的主语不一致，故可将该从句转换成现在分词独立结构作状语，这样句子结构更加紧凑，表达也更加简单。2341非谓语动词和名词性从句1名词性从句一般不能转换成分词短语，而只能转换成动名词和不定式短语。另外，考生在写作中还要注意运用“疑问词+不定式”结构。2转换成动名词短语例1：Intheinformationage,moreandmorepeopleareawareofthenecessitythattheybroadentheirhorizons.优化：Intheinformationage,moreandmorepeopleareawareofthenecessityofbroadeningtheirhorizons.分析：necessity后面的同位语从句显得有点累赘，将其转换成动名词短语以后，句子结构更加紧凑，表达也更加简单。1234转换成不定式短语例1：Itisnotuncommonthatweseethatstudentswithhighscoresdisplaypoorcompetencewhendoingjobs.优化：Itisnotuncommontoseethatstudentswithhighscoresdisplaypoorcompetencewhendoingjobs.分析：主语从句的主语we不需要体现出来，而且其中又包含一个宾语从句，句子显得有些冗长，可将主语从句转换成不定式短语，使句子结构更加紧凑，表达也更加简单。转换成“疑问词+不定式”结构例1：NowadayscollegestudentspaymoreattentiontohowtheyshouldimprovetheirEnglish.优化：NowadayscollegestudentspaymoreattentiontohowtoimprovetheirEnglish.分析：宾语从句的主语和主句主语一致，可将其转换成“疑问词+不定式”结构，这样句子结构更加紧凑，表达也更加简单。Childrenlearnhowtheyshouldbehaveproperlybothatschoolandathome.Ifwecontrastsomelibrarieswiththeirpastglories,theyhavebecomedesertedfacilitieswhicharescarcelyvisitedbystudents.优化：Childrenlearnhowtobehaveproperlybothat