2025届高三英语八省联考读后续写实例分析+课件.pptxVIP

读后续写·实例分析1Neverjudgeabookbyitscover.2025届八省联考

读后续写的评分标准综述

评分:主要从续写内容、词汇语法、篇章结构三方面考虑。1.创造情节的质量、续写的完整性及与原文情境的融洽度。2.词汇、语法的准确性、恰当性及多样性。3.上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。2

01解读文本写作步骤过滤出有效信息，把握文章要素。02缜密构思文章中心内容、段首句相结合。情节发展是主体，细节描写是关键。03打磨写作快速初步成稿，然后升级词汇与丰富句式，最后规范誊写。3

读什么？情节(plots)语言(language)伏线(clues)41.解读文本，奠定续写基础who;when;where;what;why;how语言风格；体现主题事件或推动情节发展的keywords推动情节发展，体现主旨的句子。

52.构思情节——依据两段首句推理情节发展（1）研读、翻译好两个段首句。两个段首句是重要的续写提示，在很大程度上指明了情节的发展方向。对段首句分析，可有效地推理续写的主要情节。（2）写好三个衔接句（3）写好升华句。关注与文章开头的遥相呼应（线索/意图），根据具体语境体现正能量。第一段段首句后的衔接句第一段尾句第二段段首句后的衔接句

63.打磨写作*适当升级词汇、句式*在不影响主要情节的前提下，可合理地增加部分次要情节*可依据需要增加适当细节描写（环境，心理，外貌等）替换高级词汇、短语、句式表达使用adj/adv/with复合结构/非谓语/复合句等丰富表达使用积累的地道短语和名人名言注意不要添加新角色

7阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段话。第一步：通读全文，理清脉络，把握语言特色和叙述风格。Iwas?in?Philadelphia?for?a?conference?when?I?saw?an?ad?in?thehotel.?A?nearby?theater?was?showing?a?documentary(纪录片)?aboutseveral?local?animal?shelters?that?were?helping?to?save?abandoneddogs?across?the?country.?I?love?animals,?and?I?felt?an?urge?to?go?tothis?fundraising?event.?However,?none?of?my?co-workers?would?gowith?me,?and?Iwas?worried?about?walking?on?the?street?alone?atnight.Iresigned?myself?to?spending?the?evening?in?my?hotelroom,?but?as?soon?as?Igot?back?to?my?room.I?felt?restless?andbored.The?theater?where?the?event?was?taking?place?wasonly?about?five?blocks?from?the?hotel,?and?the?area?around?thehotel?didn’t?seem?particularly?dangerous.?So,?I?decided?to?brave?it.Igathered?up?my?wallet?and?room?key?and?set?off.whenatthenightwherehoteltheater,InPhiladelphia（费城）why（起因）I,ananimal-lover,wantedtoseeadocumentaryaboutsavingdogsatanearbytheater,butnobodywentwithme.Consideringmysafety,Ishouldhavegivenupit.Butafteramentalstruggle,Idecidedtogoalone.

8Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers——verybig,tough-