2025年高考英语二轮复习专项之八省联考读后续写深度分析及配套练习.docx

八省联考读后续写深度分析及配套练习

IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary(纪录片)aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.

人物

I,co-worker

场景

inPhiladelphia,aconference,hotel,theater,street

事件

adocumentaryaboutanimalshelters

伏笔

1.Otherssavedabandoneddogs,2.Iwenttothefundraisingevent,3.Iwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.

语言风格

主谓宾结构,配简单从句。第一人称陈述,and用语较多。语言相对平实,情绪稳定。

Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestlessandbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn’tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobraveit.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.

人物

I

场景

hotelroom,theater

事件

HowIpersuadedmyselftotakeastepforward.

伏笔

1.Ifeltrestlessandbored.2.Itdidn’tseemparticularlydangerous.3.Idecidedtogo.

语言风格

依旧以简单句行文,但在心理活动描写上加了笔墨。braveit是点睛之笔,可在续写处再次提及。

Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers—verybig,tough-lookingbikers.

人物

I,bikers

场景

street,infrontofthetheater

事件

Ihappenedtomeetsomeunexpectedguyswhobotheredmealot.

伏笔

1.desertedstreets;2.inshock;3.verybig,tough-lookingbikers

语言风格

本段主要以描写场景,心理状态以及人物外貌的形容词,不断烘托故事的情绪氛围。

I’veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen—allwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedthey