读后续写练习+错号中的呼唤与温情探寻 高三上学期英语一轮复习专项.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习错号中的呼唤与温情探寻1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Iwaswalkingdownthemuddyroadonedaywhenmycellphonerang.Achildsvoiceontheotherendspoketomesoftly,Dad,pleasecomehacksoon.Imissyousomuch!”Unconsciously,Iknewitwasawrongnumberonceagain.Idon’thaveasingledaughter.Ijusthaveasix-year-oldson.Itisnotunusualtoreceivethiskindofcallsnowadays,soIrepliedrudely,Youvedialedthewrongnumber!”andthenhungupinanger.4

续写原文Duringthefollowingdays,Igotthesamecallnowandthen.Itdisturbedme,soIeitherrejectedherorhunguprightawayrudely.Icouldn’thelpcomplainingaboutthis,“Whatanimpolitegirl!Howcanshecallmeupoverandoveragain?”How1wishedthelittlegirlwouldstopcausinganytroubletomesomeday!Suddenly,thephonerangupagain.Itwasfromthesamegirl-Itseemedthatshewouldnotgiveupuntilshegotananswer.5

续写原文Sheconstantlycalledmeup.EvenifIdidnotgiveherananswer,shestilldialedmynumberfromtimetotime.EventuallyIunwillinglyansweredthephone.1heardtheweakvoiceofthatlittlegirl,“Dad,pleasecomebacknow.Imissyousomuch!Momtoldmethiswasnotawrongnumber.Itisyourcellphonenumber,right?Dad,Iaminsomuchpain!Momsaidyouweretoobusytotakecareofme.Sheistiredoutfromlookingafterme.Dad,Iknowyouarebusy.Ifyoucannotcomehome,pleasekissmeagaininthephone,OK?”Theinnocentrequestwasdifficulttoreject.Imadealoudkissintothephoneandheardaweakvoicesaying,“Thankyou....Dad,Iamso...happy,so…happy6

段首句Paragraph1：Shortlyafterthis,Ibecameinterestedinwhohadbeenontheotherendofmyphone.Paragraph2：Icouldn’twaittoaskthewomanhowherdaughterwas.7

Part2题目分析8

续写原文分析9“我”在泥泞路上行走时，多次接到一个小女孩误拨的电话，她声声呼唤“爸爸”，渴望爸爸回家和得到亲吻。起初“我”感到厌烦，粗鲁回应。但小女孩执着拨打，最终“我”回应了她的请求。此后，“我”对电话那头的她产生好奇，决定探寻背后的故事，为后续了解小女孩的处境和她家庭的状况埋下伏笔。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第