读后续写练习+出国梦遇阻，梦中惊醒后亲情和解 高三上学期英语一轮复习专项.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习出国梦遇阻，梦中惊醒后亲情和解1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文“Daddy,Ihavesomethingtotellyou.IwantedtoaskyourpermissiontogotoAmerica.”Ididn’tfinishmyspeechasheshouted,“No!”“Butwhy?What…”,Ireplied.“Ifthisallisaboutmoney,thenyoumaynotworry,Igotascholarship…”Ididn’tknowwhattodo.Ifeltawarmtearrunningdownmycheek.IthoughttherewouldbenoproblembecausehealwaysknewhowmuchIdreamtaboutstudyingabroad.Iwassoangryandsaid:“ButwhydoIhavetoaskyourpermission?Iamalready18andI’mnotakidanymore.Youcan’ttellmewhatisrightandwhatiswrong.”4

续写原文Ishutthedoorsohardthatitstaggered.Iwassodisappointedthatalltheseyearshecouldn’tseewhatIwasdoing.Thetearswereflowingontheirown.Irealizedhowmuchmylovefordadwas,however,Ijustcouldnotstayatmyhometownanymore.Ilefthomeandmyeyeswerefullofangerandtears.Ididn’tknowwhattodoandwhattoexpect,butIdecidedtogofarawayfromhomeandstartcreatingmydreamlife.Itookabusandwenttotheairport.Iclosedmyeyesandfeltthatsomethingwaswrong.EverythingwassosilentwhensuddenlyIheardmyphoneringing.Itwasanursefromthelocalhospital:5

续写原文“Hello!AreyouthedaughterofKuat?”,sheasked.“Yourdadhashadaheartattackandhe’sinacomanow.Thesituation’sserious.Wewantyou…”Iwasn’tlisteningtoheranymore.TearswereflowingandIstartedtochokewhenallofasuddenIheardaman’svoiceandopenedmyeyes.Irealizedthatitwasanightmare.6

段首句Paragraph1：Istartedsearchingformyphoneandwantedtohearmydad’svoice.Paragraph2：“Hereyouare,mysweetie.I’mnotlettingyouleavebecauseIdon’twantyoutoforgetme.7

Part2题目分析8

续写原文分析9主人公满心期待地向父亲提出想去美国留学，还表示已有奖学金。可父亲却坚决反对，主人公愤怒地指责父亲，觉得父亲不理解自己多年来的梦想。她负气离家前往机场，途中却接到医院电话，称父亲心脏病发作昏迷，情况危急。就在她悲痛欲绝时，却发现这只是一场噩梦。经历这场梦，她对父亲的情感有了新的感悟，也为后续与父亲的交流埋下伏笔。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾