高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习：平凡之日，我成为+“电影式”+英雄 .pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习平凡之日，我成为“电影式”英雄1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Ilikewatchingmovies.Inthemovies,kidsarealwayssospecial.Theyareusuallyreallysmart.Ortheyareneverscaredofanythingfrightening.Ortheyhavemagicpowerandcanhelpthoseingreattroubleout.Whyhasntthiseverhappenedtome?Iamnotassmartasthekidsinthemovies.Ihavenevermetwithanythingscary.AndIamnotpowerfulenoughtohelpsomeoneoutoftrouble.ButIdohopeIcanbecomesuchaheroasthoseinthemovies.Mymothersaystheheroesinthemoviesdontexistinreallife,addingthatbeingaheroisreallygood,butIamtooyoungtobecomeone.ItwasMonday.Nothingseemedspecial.Itwassunny,withbirdssinginginthesky.IwaswalkinghomefromschoolalongtheusualstreetwhenInoticedanoldwomanontheothersideofthestreet.Shewaswalkingveryslowly,slidingherhandalongthefence.Shelookedlikeapersonleftbehindbythesubway;everyonewasracingpasther.Deepdowninmyheart,Isensedthatsomethingwasnotright.Outofcuriosity,Idecidedtocrossthestreet.4

续写原文Isqueezed(挤)intothecrowdandapproachedherfromtheside.“Areyouokay?”Iasked.Shemadenoanswer.“Excuseme,”Isaidalittlelouder.“Areyouokay?”“Canyougivemeyourhand,littleboy?”askedthewoman,lookingsad.Withouthesitation,Igavehermyhand.ThenIsawherfacelitup.ItwasthenthatIrealizedthatshewasblind.“Whereareyougoing?”Iaskedher.“Tomydaughter’shome,”shereplied.“It’sherbirthdaytoday.Ibringheragift.”5

段首句Paragraph1：Thewomantoldmeherdaughter’saddress.Paragraph2：“Youarehere!”thedaughtersaidindisbelief.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8“我”喜欢看电影，渴望像电影中的孩子一样成为英雄。一个周一，“我”放学回家途中，看到街道对面一位老妇人行动迟缓，似乎与周围匆忙的人群格格不入。出于好奇，“我”上前询问，发现她是盲人，要去女儿家送生日礼物。老妇人告知“我”她女儿的地址，“我”决定送她过去。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9

续写思路分析Para1：The