高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习：妈妈的慈善罐，传递爱与温暖 .pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习妈妈的慈善罐，传递爱与温暖1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Ialwaysthinkofmymotherasasuperhero,becausesheneverrunsoutofroominherheartforanyoneoranything.Icouldwriteaboutallofthewonderfulthingsshehasdone,butIwanttofocusononeprojectshedoeseveryyearthathasshapedmywholefamilyandeveryonearoundus:Shesavesmoney,andsheputsitinalittlejar(罐子)thatwerefertoas“TheCharityJar”.Everyyear,shetakesthismoneyandputsittowardsomething—anactofkindness,anythingthatcanhelpsomeone.Sometimes,shebuyssomethingforanorganizationthatneedsit.Ifyouaskheraboutthistradition,shewilltellyouthatsheiscarryingonsomethingthathermotherusedtodoaroundtheholidays.Ifyouaskanyoneelsewhoknowsher,however,theywilltellyouthatshehasahugeheart.Shemanagestogetourwholefamilyinvolved(参与)inthismovementeveryyear.Lastyear,shehelpedanorganizationwhereIvolunteered—Ruth’sPlace—ahomelesswomen’sshelterinWilkes-Barre,Pennsylvania.4

续写原文IhadbeenhelpingaprofessorrunawritingworkshopintheshelterwhenInoticedthewishlistonthewall:warmclothes,acoffeemakerandsupplies.Itoldmymom,andwithinaday,shehadalreadyaskedifourfamilywantedtohelpRuth’sPlace.Weallagreedanddecidedthatthecoffeemakerandsupplieswouldbethebestthingsforourfamilytoworkontogether.Afewdayslater,Momfoundacoffeemakeronline,andshowedittous.Withafewclicks,itwasonitsway.Shealsobaked(烘焙)freshchocolatecupcakesforthewomenintheshelter.Wegatheredtherestofthesuppliesandcalledthesheltertofindadaywhenwecoulddeliverthem.5

段首句Paragraph1：ThatdayIdrovemymomtotheshelterveryslowly.Paragraph2：Asweleft,weweremetwithheartfeltthanks.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8“我”视妈妈为超级英雄，她每年都有个特别的传统——将攒下的钱放进“慈善罐”，用于帮助他人。这一传统源于外婆。去年，“我”在一家为无家可归女性设立的庇护所做志愿者，向妈妈提及那里的愿望清单。妈妈很快组织全家参与，购买了咖啡机等物资，并