高考英语复习读后续写练习：打破对拉德克先生院子的恐惧之规+课件.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习打破对拉德克先生院子的恐惧之规1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Ruleoneandtheonlyrule:IfthefootballgoesintoMr.Radtke’syard,leavetheball,runhomeandthekidresponsibleforsendingtheballintotheforbiddenzoneshouldtoleratethelifelongscorn(蔑视)ofalltheplayers,”saidBengravely.Therulethathisbestfriend,Ben,toldhimagainandagainpuzzledJoeyalot.Helookedattheyardinfrontofhim,nothingspecial—alonelyhousewithahighfenceallaroundandatreeeventallerthanthefencebytheclosefrontgate.“ButBen,wewouldn’tbeharminganything.Ifourballshouldgooverhisfence,I’mgettingit.”“Goodluckwiththat.OldmanRadtkeistheugliestguyinthisneighbourhood.Noonedarestogointohisyard.”“What’ssoscaryabouthim?”Joeyasked,stillconfused.4

续写原文“Bigscarsonhisface,onlyoneeye,andhalfofhisteetharemissing.Anuglyguylikethatisdefinitelyabadguy.”“Butmyfathertoldme,neverjudgeabookbyitscover.”“Whatever.Let’splayfootball.”Bensaid,seeminglyimpatient.Hearingthis,Joeytemporarilytookthedoubtoffhismindandjoinedtheboys.Theypassedtheballtoeachotherandmostofthetimeranaftertheballinthefieldlikethewind.Butsuddenly,Joeykickedtheballtoohard,anditsoaredoverthefenceandlandedinRadtke’syard.Seeingthis,alltheothersranhomedesperately,leavingonlyJoeyandBengluedtothespot.“Getoutofhere,rightnow,”Benurged.“Perhaps,I—I—Icangetitback,withoutdis—disturbingMr.Radtke,”Joeyhesitatedinalowvoice.“Buthow?”returnedBen.5

段首句Paragraph1：WhenJoey’seyefellonthetreebythegate,anideaflashedintohismind.Paragraph2：HearingJoey’sscreamofpain,Radtkerushedout.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8文章讲述了本告诉乔伊一条规则：如果足球踢进拉德克先生的院子，就别要球了，赶紧跑回家，而且踢球的人要承受所有球员的终生蔑视。乔伊对此十分不解，他觉得拉德克先生的院子没什么特别。在踢球时，乔伊把球踢进了拉德克先生的院子，其他人都跑了，只有乔伊和本留在原地。乔伊不甘心放弃球，本却劝他离开。此时，乔伊看着院子门口的树，想到了一个主意。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段