高考英语复习读后续写练习：从低谷到逆袭：赛场的信心之旅.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从低谷到逆袭：赛场的信心之旅1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文MyheartbeatfastasIwalkedontothefieldforthestatecupfinals.Theairpoppedwithamixofexcitementandnervousness-afeelingIknewwell.Butthistimewasdifferent.Theaudiencewereeverywhereandthisaddedalayerofpressure,twistingmystomachintoaknot.Withawhistlethatbrokethetensesilence,thegamebegan.Theballcamestraighttome.Idroveforward,slippedaroundadefender,andlostit.Ontheverynextplay,Igaveitstraightawayagain.Myconfidence,onceasteadyflame,begantoweaken.Determinednottorepeatthemistake,Iplayeditsafenexttimeandpasseditback.Barelyevenontarget,Iwaslosingit.Icouldfeelothers’eyesburningintothebackofmyhead.4

续写原文Byhalftime,thescorewasafrustrating0-0.Exhaustedanddiscouraged,Ijustwantedthefinalwhistletoblow.Thesecondhalfkickedoff,offeringachancetoturnthingsaround.Butmystrugglescontinued.AsIranupthefield,theballfoundmyfootagain.Yet,insteadofacleanpass,Imishititstraighttoadefender.Defeatfloodedme.Ionlymadesafepasses,desperatenottomakeanothermistake.Then,threesharpblows.Overtime(加时赛).Myheartsank.HowcouldIpossiblyfaceanothertoughperiod,withthisself-doubtweighingmedown?Onmywaytothelockerroom(更衣室),mylegsfeltheavylikeleadweights.TheusualenthusiasmIhadwhenplayingwasreplacedbyself-doubt.5

段首句Paragraph1：AsIwalkedintothelockerroom,mycoachcameuptome.Paragraph2：Thewhistleblewforovertime,andIraceddownthefield,hopeinmychest.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8“我”带着紧张与兴奋踏上州杯决赛赛场，观众的存在让压力倍增。比赛开始后，“我”接连失误，信心受挫。上半场0:0结束，下半场“我”依旧表现不佳，频繁犯错。进入加时赛，“我”满心沮丧，对自己充满怀疑。就在这时，转机出现。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9

续写思路分析Para1：AsIwalkedintothelockerroom,mycoachcameuptome.当我走进更衣室，教练径直向我走来。他目光坚定地看着