读后续写练习+为冰淇淋，小吉米踏上+“征途” 高三上学期英语一轮复习专项.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习为冰淇淋，小吉米踏上“征途”1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Jimmylovedicecream.Itwashisfavoritedessert.Hewantedtoeaticecreamallthetime.Hisparentslethimhaveasmalldisheachnightafterdinner,ifheateallofhisvegetables.Athome,Jimmyusuallyhadchocolate.Hismotherspooneditoutofthecarton(硬纸盒)andintohisbowl.Jimmylikedeatingicecreamathome,buthereallylovedgoingtotheicecreamstandtogetanicecreamcone.Thereweresomanydifferentflavorstotry.Jimmyalwaysdidhisbesttotryanewkindoficecreameachtime.4

续写原文WhenJimmyturnedeight,hehadacheckupatthedoctor’soffice.DrKatzsaidthaticecreamwasn’taveryhealthysnack.“It’sfinetohavealittleicecreamonceinawhile,butnoteverynight,”shesaid.Afterthedoctor’svisit,Jimmyandhismomdrovehome.“CanIstillhaveicecreamfordesserttonight?”Jimmyasked.“Idon’tthinkso,honey,”Momsaid.“Weshouldalltrytobehealthier.”5

续写原文Thatnightatsupper,Jimmyateallhisvegetables.Buttherewasnoicecreamfordessert.Instead,Momcameupwithanewrule.“Ifwewanttoeaticecream,we’llhavetoearnitbywalkingtotheicecreamstand,”shesaid.Jimmywaswillingtogiveitatry,sotheydecidedtotaketheirwalkonSaturdayafternoon.Accordingtothemap,theicecreamstandwasamileaway.Saturdaywasahotandsunnyday.Jimmybegantofeelsweaty.Thesunwassobrightthathehadtosquint(眯着眼).Hekepthiseyelids(眼皮)almostallthewayclosed,withjustasmallcracktostretchoutof.“I’mhot,”saidJimmy.“Howmuchfartherisit?”6

段首句Paragraph1：Momcheckedthemaponherphone.Paragraph2：WhenJimmytoldMomtoreadytoturnaround,hesawthepurpleflagatthetopoftheicecreamstand.7

Part2题目分析8

续写原文分析9小吉米对冰淇淋情有独钟，每晚饭后都能享用一份。然而，八岁时的一次体检，医生告知冰淇淋并非健康零食，不宜每晚食用。此后，妈妈制定新规，若想吃冰淇淋，需步行至一英里外的摊位。周六，酷热难耐，吉米在前往摊位的路上大汗淋漓、疲惫不堪，不断询问还有多远，但他始终没有放弃，一心想着美味的冰淇淋。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段