高考英语复习读后续写练习：为妹奔跑：汤姆的鞋之征程 .pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习为妹奔跑：汤姆的鞋之征程1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Tomandhisyoungersister,Jane,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks(紧盯着他们).Oneday,TomtookJane’sshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasn’tuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.4

续写原文JaneagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareTom’srunningshoes.Jane’sschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoTom.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Tomoftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.Tomheardaboutalong-distanceracethatwouldbeheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.5

续写原文Thedayofracearrived.Tomhadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.GettingmoreandmoreexhaustedhethoughtonlyofJaneandhispromisetoher.Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrength,andhestayedrightbehindthetwofastestrunners,determinedtofinishthird.Suddenly,anotherrunnercollided(碰撞)withTomfrombehindandhecrashedtotheground.6

段首句Paragraph1：Tomlookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Paragraph2：Filledwithpleasure,Tomwalkedhomewithoutanydelay.7

Part2题目分析8

续写原文分析9汤姆和妹妹简家境贫寒，母亲生病，父亲难找工作，还面临房租压力。汤姆弄丢简的鞋后，两人只能共用他的跑鞋。为给简赢双新鞋，汤姆决定参加长跑比赛，因为三等奖是新鞋。比赛当天，他起初状态不错，但中途体力不支，后来还被撞倒。然而，他一心想着对妹妹的承诺，努力追赶。最后他带