人教版八年级下册英语 Unit 3 Could you please clean your room？满分话题作文范文与解析 学案.docx

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人教版八年级下册英语Unit3Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom？满分话题作文范文与解析学案

1．假设你是丽莎(Lisa),某英文报刊正在就“ShouldTeenagersHelpTheirParentswithHousework”这一话题展开征文活动，请你根据自己的体会，写一篇短文向该报社投稿。

提示：1.What’syouropinion(观点)aboutit?

2.Whyshouldteenagershelptheirparentswithhousework?

3.Whataretheadvantages(好处)ofdoinghousework?

要求：1.语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥。2.不少于70词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearSirorMadam,

Ithinkthat_____________________________________________________________________

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Yourstruly,

Lisa

【答案】DearSirorMadam,

Ithinkthatteenagerslikemeshouldhelpourparentswithhousework.

First,doinghouseworkmakesusindependent.Wecan’tdependonourparentsallthetime.Soweshouldlearnhowtotakecareofourselvesnow.

Second,doinghouseworkisakindofphysicalexercise.Ithelpsusstayhealthyandstrong.

Third,sinceweliveinahousewithourparents,it’sfairforustoworktogetherandmakethehousecleanandcomfortable.

Allinall,doinghouseworkhelpsustolearnlifeskillsandunderstandtheideaoffairness.SoIthinkteenagersshouldlearntoenjoydoingitwithourparents.

????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Yours??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Lisa

【解析】

【详解】

本文是根据自己的体会，写一篇短文向该报社，所以句子的主语用第一人称，句子的谓语动词用一般现在时，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，要使用高级的句式和词汇。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：helpsbwithsth帮助某人做某事；takecareof照顾；itis+形容词+forsbtodosth,makesth+形容词；enjoydoingsth喜欢做某事。用了that，since引导的从句，增加了文章的亮点。

2．学生做家务不仅可以培养劳动意识，而且有利