高考英语复习读后续写练习：从+“山羊”+到河流：伊娃的游泳蜕变 .pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从“山羊”到河流：伊娃的游泳蜕变1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Evaknewshe’dhavetoswimonthe“goat”again.Thethoughtmadeherwanttoturnherbicyclearoundandheadhome,butshedidn’t.ShekeptridingalongtherivertowardMrKovar’shouseforherswimminglesson.Eva’stownhadnopublicpools.Theuniversityhadapool,butitwasonlyforswimteams.Evahadseenthepoolwhenherbrothershadbeenontheschoolswimteam,andsheiseagertoswiminitsbluewater.Butnow,Evaandtheotherstudentshadtolearntoswimbylyingonapieceofwoodfixedonasawhorse(锯木架).Thesawhorselookedlikeagoat.AfterEvareachedMrKovar’shouse,hebeganhisclass.“TellmethebasicswimmingwayIhaveaughtyou!”MrKovarsaid.“Lieonmyfront;swingonearmovermyhead,andthentheotherarm.Meanwhile,kickthewater,”Evareplied.MrKovarsaid,“OK.Now,practice.Onehundredstrokes(划水)!”Evaclimbedontothesawhorseandlayonherstomachbuttherewasnowateraround.4

续写原文MrKovarwalkedaroundEvaasshepracticedherstrokes.“Fingerstogether,”hesaidandtappedherhand.Nexthetappedherhead,saying,“Breatheonlywhenyouturnyourhead.”FindingMrKovaroftenlookedunsatisfied,Evabecamenervous.“Thirty-seven,thirty-eight,”MrKovarsaid,countingherstrokes.Weekafterweek,MrKovarcountedandtapped.Eachweek,Evatriedtobreakherrecordforfewesttaps.Oneday,MrKovarsaid,“You’rereadytoswiminthewater.”“Theuniversitypool?”Evaaskedhappily.MrKovarsaid,“Youcannotswimthereunlessyou’reonateam.Youcannotbeonateamunlessyoupassmyclass.IcannotpassyouuntilIseeyouswiminthewater.Youmustfirstswimintheriver.”“Isitsafe?”Evaasked.Theriverwascoldandmuddy.“It’ssafeifyou’reagoodswimmer,”saidMrKovar.ThenextdayEvaandhermothermetMrKovarattheriver.5

段首句Paragraph1：WhenMrKovargavethesignal,Evarushedintothebrownwater.Paragraph2：