人教版初中八年级下册英语习题课件 Unit 3 Could you please clean your room 6. 单元话题写作 Section B (3a-Self Check).ppt

Unit3Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom?单元话题写作SectionB(3a-SelfCheck)

单元写作目标此单元的话题是“家务劳动”,较贴近学生生活,我们能够有感而发。在具体的写作中,应做到以下几点:①能描述某次家务劳动;②能结合实际谈谈对做家务的看法;③能使用正确的文体和时态进行写作。素材积累开头句1.I’mgladtosharemyideasofdoingchores.2.WhenI’mfree,Ioftenhelpmyparentsdochoreslikedoingthedishes,cleaningtheroomsandwateringflowers.

3.Ithinkweshouldhelpparentsdochores.中间句1.Bydoingthesethings,I’velearnedtotakegoodcareofmyselfandmyfamily.2.Houseworkisboringandtiring,butIreallyfeelhappytodosomethingformyfamily.3.Ittookmemorethanonehourtofinishthecooking.

结尾句1.Ithinkweallshouldhelptodowhatwecaninourfamily.2.Inmyopinion,itisnecessaryforustodosomechores.3.Bydoingchores,wecanalsorelaxourselvesfromhardworkanddevelopourindependence.

范文分析假设你是王伟,你收到了好友李雷的电子邮件。在邮件中,李雷向你诉说了他的烦恼。请结合该邮件内容,给李雷回复一封电子邮件,劝说其理解父母并谈谈做家务的必要性。DearWangWei,Howareyou?I’msoangryrecently.Mymotheralwaysasksmetodosomehousework,butIdon’twanttodoitbecauseI’mbusywithmyschoolworkeveryday.WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Yours,LiLei

审题1.文体:应用文2.时态:一般现在时3.人称:第一人称、第二人称4.要点提取:提建议

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成篇DearLiLei,I’mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.I’msorrytohearthatyouaresoangrythesedays.Ithinkyoushouldhelpyourparentsdochores.First,doingchorescanmakeyouknowhowhardyourparentsareandunderstandthembetter.Youcanlearnalotfromdoingchores,too.Second,ithelpstodevelopyourindependenceandteachesyoutoloveothers.It’sgoodforyourdevelopment.Finally,it’snotenoughthatyoujustgetgood

gradesatschool.Inmyopinion,youshouldstudyandlearntodochores.Yours,WangWei

写作训练作为一名中学生,你是如何理解劳动(labor)的意义呢?请分享你曾有过的一次劳动经历并谈谈你的体会。内容包括:1.Whatdoeslabormeantoyou?2.Tellusanexperiencethatyouhad.3.Whatshouldwedo?要求:1.词数:80词左右;2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

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