读后续写：萤火虫光芒下的父女亲情，让我想到了朱自清的背影+课件-浙江省强基联盟2025届高三下学期2月联考英语试题.pptxVIP

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萤火虫光芒下的父女亲情，让我想到了朱自清的背影

浙江省强基联盟2025届高三下学期2月联考英语试题;原文分析;1.原文赏析;2、原文审读红色定从/定语；蓝色宾从；黄色状从，从句斜体；下划线+标黄单词+斜体为需掌握积累单词、短语；黑体标黄，非谓语；可积累部分为embody；注释(定语从句);“I’mfine,”Ilied.

Herolledhiseyes,coughed,putonhisjacketandshoes,?andledmeupthepath(动作串).Aswewalked,(状从)?withleavesrustling(沙沙作响)(with复合短语),hefoundtheenergytogive?meaminibiologylectureontheluminescent(发冷光的)?powersofthefireflies?andinstructedmeto“spottheirguidinglights.”?BeforeIknewit(状从),weweresafeatourdestination.

“Loveyou,besafe,”hewavedtome,beforeheadingbackdownthedarktrack,firefliesflashingaroundhim(独立主格).

“Bye,takecare.”Ireplied,loving?himtoo(现在分词短语做伴随动作),butnotalwaysabletosayit.

注意：

（1）续写词数应为150左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:However,ashestartedtowalkbackdownthedarktrack,Ifeltasuddenurgetofollow.

Paragraph2:Acoupleofdayslater,mydadtookadrivearoundJamaicawithme.;故事山模式：;;;1.读后续写分类与构思分析;2.故事山模式与原文分析;动作描写;伏笔处与冲突点：

伏笔：萤火虫的描写暗示父爱的温暖与希望；黑暗小路象征主人公的情感困境。

冲突点：主人公对父亲的疏离感与内心对父爱的渴望之间的冲突。

隐含线索：萤火虫的“guidinglights”象征父亲对女儿的引导与关爱。

解决方案：通过跟随父亲走回小路和游览牙买加，主人公逐渐理解并接受父亲的爱。;3.续写语料推荐;心理描写例句：

Awaveofguiltwashedoverherassherealizedhowmuchshehadmisunderstoodhim.

Shefeltastrangesenseofpeaceasshewalkedbesidehim,herearlierangermeltingaway.

Hiswordsechoedinhermind,stirringupemotionsshehadlongsuppressed.

Shecouldn’thelpbutsmile,feelingadeepsenseofgratitudeforhispresence.

Asenseoflongingfilledherheartasshewatchedhimwalkaway.

Shefeltasuddenurgetotellhimhowmuchshelovedhim,butthewordsstuckinherthroat.

Hermindracedwithconflictingemotions,unsureofhowtoexpresswhatshewasfeeling.

Shefeltadeepsenseofreliefasshefinallyunderstoodhisintentions.;环境描写例句：

Themooncastasoftglowoverthelandscape,illuminatingthepathahead.

Theairwasfilledwiththescentofbloomingflowers,creatingasere