高考英语复习读后续写练习：粉刺之痛：成长路上的嘲笑与温暖+课件.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习粉刺之痛：成长路上的嘲笑与温暖1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文“No!”screamedAshaasshesawahugepimple（粉刺）onhernose.Shedidn’thavetimetocoverthepimpleasshewasrunninglatetoschool.Sheateherbreakfastfast,grabbedherbagandcaughtherschoolbusjustintime.Assoonasshegotonthebus,kidsstartedlaughing.Nobodywaswillingtolethersitbesidethem.EvenAnita,herbestfriend,actedabitdifferently,whichmadehermoreupset.Ashawaslostinthought.Anewthoughtpoppedinhermindeverysecond.Onceshethought“Great!Ihavetoworryaboutmypimpleasifhomeworkandexamswerenotenough.”Thenextminuteanotherthoughtpoppedinhermind.“Iamtiredofusingthisfacewash.IstillwonderhowIagreedtousethatthing!”Thensuddenly,Mr.Shetty,thebusdriver,said,“Asha,doyouwanttomisstheclass?”Ashawassolostinherthoughtthatshedidnotevennoticethateverybodyhadgotoffthebusexcepther.4

续写原文Shedidnotwanttostepintotheschoolcampus.Shethought,“Whatwillmyteachersthink?Whatwillmyfriendsthink?”Aftersometime,shegatheredcourageandenteredherclass;expectingthatshewouldbelaughedat.Whileenteringtheclass,sheheardstudentscommentingonherpimple.Achildlaughed,“Look,someone’scherryisonhernose!Getitforme.”Sheheardsomeboysmurmuring,“Shewoulddefinitelybechosenasthejokerinthedance.”Itwasaveryharddayatschoolforher.Assoonasshegothome,shehuggedhermothertightly,withtearswellingupinhereyes.5

段首句Paragraph1Ashatoldhermotherwhatshehadexperiencedintheday._Paragraph2:AshaopenedthedoorandincameherfriendAnitawithabunchofflowers.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8阿莎某天早上惊恐地发现自己鼻子上长了一个大粉刺，由于上学时间紧迫，她来不及处理就匆匆赶去学校。上了校车后，同学们看到她的粉刺纷纷嘲笑，没人愿意和她坐在一起，就连她最好的朋友安妮塔的态度也变得有些异样，这让阿莎十分难过。在校车上，阿莎陷入了深深的自我怀疑和烦恼之中，她觉得除了作业和考试的压力，还要面对这颗粉刺带来的困扰，甚至开始抱怨一直使用的洗面奶毫无效果。她沉浸在自己的思绪里，直到校车司机提醒才发现车上其他人都已下车。到了学校，她鼓起勇气走进教室，不出所料，同学们对她的粉刺议论纷纷，各种嘲笑和讽刺的