高考英语复习读后续写练习：困境中的希望：感恩母爱与邻里温情的力量+课件.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习困境中的希望：感恩母爱与邻里温情的力量1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Iwasfifteenwhenmyworldtookahopelessturnfortheworst.Mymomwasdiagnosedwithcanceragain.Shehadundergonesurgeryandbeatenthecancer.Thenthecancercameback.However,therewasmoretoworryaboutthanthediseasethatmymomwasbattling.Mydadhadleftusyearsbefore.Besides,becauseofthemountingmedicalbillsshewaspayingforherpreviouscancer,wewereontheedgeoffinancialruin.Iwastooyoungtogetajob.Thatwinterwastheworst.Wedidn’thavemoneytopayforelectricity.Ourneighbor,Sophia,allowedustouseherelectricitysothatwecouldhaveonelamponinourhome.Thegasstoveinthelivingroomwastheonlyheatinourhouse.Mymomsleptinhercoldroom,withasmanyblanketsaswecouldpileonher.4

续写原文ThanksgivingDaycame.Isearchedourcupboardsforfoodandtherewasn’tmuch.IstartedslammingdoorsasIlookedthroughthecabinetsforacanoffoodwemighthavemissed.ThemoreIsearched,theangrierIbecame.Thenoisemusthavewokenmymom,becauseshecametothekitchenwrappedinablanket.Shelookedworriedatmeandasked,“Baby,what’swrong,”Iretorted,“I’mhungry.I’mfreezingtodeathinourownhouse,”Iwasn’tangryather.Iwasangryatoursituation.Sheopenedherarmstowardmeandsaid,“Comehere.Rightnowthingsarehard,buthopeisalwaysthere.Whateverdifficultieswemeet,weshouldbestrong.Allyouhavetodoishavefaith.Whynotbelievewecanbebetterbyusingourownhands?”5

段首句Paragraph1：IwasdeeplyashamedofwhatIhaddoneandsaid.Paragraph2:JustasIwonderedwhattodotospendthenight,Sophiaknockedatourdoor.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8“我”十五岁时，生活陷入了绝境。妈妈癌症复发，此前因治疗癌症已背负巨额债务，家庭经济濒临崩溃，而爸爸多年前就已离开。那年冬天尤为艰难，家里没钱交电费，多亏邻居索菲亚允许我们使用她家的电，屋里仅靠客厅的煤气炉取暖。感恩节那天，“我”翻找橱柜，发现食物所剩无几，心中又气又急，愤怒地摔门。妈妈被吵醒，她裹着毯子来到厨房询问情况，“我”向她抱怨又饿又冷。妈妈没有生气，而是张开双臂安慰“我”，告诉“我”即便身处困境，也要心怀希望，要有信念，相信靠自己的双手能让生活变好。

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