高考英语复习读后续写练习：守护父亲花园：从逃避到担当的成长蜕变+课件.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习守护父亲花园：从逃避到担当的成长蜕变1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Iliveinasmallbutlovelyneighborhood.Ourhouseisneitherlargenorluxurious,butithasafairlybiggarden.Myfatherloveshisgarden.Heplantedsomeseedsinitandtookgoodcareoftheplants,wateringthem,applyingfertilizer,weedingandgettingridofbugs.Hewasnevertiredofdoingallthatstuff.Butatthattime,Ididntunderstandwhyworkinginthedirtexcitedhimsomuch.Unfortunately,inthesummervacationbeforeseniorhighschool,myfatherwasseriouslyinjuredinanaccident.Hehadtostayinbedforawhile.Mymotherhadseveralbusinesstrips,soshecouldnttakecareofthegarden.[didntwantmyfathertoworry.IsaidthatIwouldtakecareofhisgardenuntilherecovered.Iassumedthatthelittleplantswouldcontinuetogrowaslongastheyhadwater,andluckilyitrainedfairlyoften,soIdidntthinkmuchaboutthegarden.4

续写原文OneSaturdaymorning,myfathersaidtome,“Christine,thevegetablesshouldbeaboutreadytobepicked.Letshaveasaladtoday!Iwentouttothegardenandwasupsettoseethatmanyofthelettuce(生菜)leavesandcarrotshadbeenhalfeatenbybugs.Therewerehundredsofbugsalloverthem!IpanickedforamomentbutthenIquietlywenttothenearestsupermarkettobuysomevegetables.WhenIwasmakingthesalad,mymothercamehomeandsawthebagfromthesupermarketinthekitchen.Iwasembarrassedandadmitted,“Dadwouldlikeasalad,butthegardenisadisaster.Idontwanttodisappointhim,soIwenttothestoreandboughtsomevegetables.Mymothersmiled,saying,“Honey,youknowwhatistherightthingtodo.”5

段首句Paragraph1:MyfatherseemedverypleasedwhenItookthesaladtohim.Paragraph2:Feelingguilty,Idecidedtodotherightthing.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8“我”生活在一个温馨的小社区，家中有个较大的花园，父亲对花园倾注了很多心血，悉心照料里面的植物，但年少的“我”并不理解父亲的这份热爱。高中前的暑假，父亲在一次意外中受重伤，只能卧床休养。此时母亲因工作需要多次出差，无法照顾花园。为了不让父亲担心，“我”主动承担起照料花园的