2025届高三英语复习读后续写（2） 审题+内容构建+扩句 导学案.docxVIP

2025年

英语培优2学练案审题、内容构建+扩句

一审题、内容构建（passage2,3,4）

1.基于主题；故事山模型；契诃夫之枪；双线（情节线、情感线）；添加场景、心理描写；

2.情节设置合理（符合常理、符合人物年龄、身份）

3.利用衔接与连贯

4.Questionsandanswers

审题训练2姐姐的成长

思路构建：

SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.

Q1.Whowerethey?Whatdidtheysayanddo?

Myparents.Theysuggestedhavingapicnicthere.

Q2.Myresponses.Igreetedthesuggestionwithajump.

Q3.Wewereinthefieldwithspringflowers.Whathappenedlater(todrawmeclosertomyparentsandlittlesister)?Wemadeflowerchainsandjokedwitheachotherasbefore.

Q4：lastsentenceofpra1:Rosacried./Iapproachedthebabybasket.

Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.

Q5.DescribeRosa.Cute./Shewascryingwithherarmswavingandlegskicking./shestoppedcryingandsmiledatme.

Q6.Theshiftofmyfeelingsforher.Herpinkcheeksandsweetsmilemeltedmyheart.

Q7.WhatdidIdo?Iwoundtheflowerchainaroundthehandleofherbabybasket.

Q8:Aproperending.MyformerenvyofRosagavewaytomyaffectionforher.Ifinallygrewintotheroleofabigsisiter.

思路纠正

Theyweremymomandaunt.围绕主要矛盾

IdecidedtotakeRosaouttogiveheralift.情节合理性

Fewflowersblossomovernight没有花儿能在一夜之间开放（我需要时间来接受我的妹妹）,butagardencanhaveblossomingflowersawholeyear.

ItookRosaoutofthebabybasket.IgaveRosasomethingtoeat.Rosawasalittleangry.情节合理性Rosaisaone-month-oldbaby;Iamaten-year-oldchild;Myparentsweretheretwo.

Theyledmetoaparkwherewewouldhaveapicnic.

Theloveyougetfromyourparentsneverreduce.

审题训练3邮差父亲

AtonepointFranklookedatmewithtearsinhiseyesasifrecallingsomething.

Q1.Recallingwhat?MyfatherwastheSantaClaus.

Q2.Myresponse?Iwassurprised.

Q3:Lastsentenceofpara1:Hetalkedabouthowmyfathertriedhisbesttobringpleasureforothers.

Thinkingofthisphilosophyofpleasure,Iresolvedtobethisyear’sSantaClaus.

Q4.WhatdidIdoandsay?Iop