2025届高三英语复习读后续写 3 扩句技巧 展现 强动词 导学案.docxVIP

2025年

英语培优3学案扩句技巧（展现、强动词）+培优二跟踪训练讲评

一展现（感官描写、强动词等）

展现：show,donottell表达形象、生动、准确，有画面感

Whatistellandshow?

Whenyouaretelling,you’resupplyinginformationbysimplystatingit陈述.Youmightreportthatacharacteris“tall,”or“angry,”or“cold,”or“tired.”

Showingpaintsapicturethereadercanseeinhermind’seye.Ratherthantellingthatyourcharacterisangry,showitbydescribinghisfaceflushing,histhroattightening,hisvoicerising,hisslammingafistonthetable.

展现的表达手法

描写细节、具体表现

利用感官

尽量不用形容词和be动词、笼统动词

用强动词(stride,exclaim,weep,yell等)

Examples:

Iamshocked.

Hearingtheunexpectednews,Iwasstruckdumb./Iwassoshockedthatwordsfailedme.

Myclassmatescongratulatedmeonmysuccess.

Myclassmateswhooped激动地大叫andclappedtheirhandsenthusiastically.

Thelittlegirlwasveryhappytowalkontothestagetoreceiveherprize.

Hearingthenews,shewasontopoftheworld.Shescreamedindelightandjumpedforjoy.Stridingontothestagewithherheadhigh,shesmiledfromeartoear.Awaveofpleasureshotthroughherasshetastedthesweetjoyofwinning.

Myteacherpraisedme.

Myteachergavemeathumbandsaid/praised:“Welldone!”

Iwasquitebusyonmywaytowork.

WhenIwasdrivingthroughrushhourtraffic,mylefthandwasonthesteeringwheel,whilemyrighthandwasarrangingappointmentsonthecellphone.ThenextmomentIwaswrappingabirthdaypresentatthetrafficlight.

Shefeltcold.

Shepulledhercollarup,tightenedherscarf,shoved随便放置，乱放herhandsdeepintoherpocketsandturnedherfaceawayfromthebitingwind.

Hewastired.

Heyawnedandstretchedhisarms.Hiseyeslookedpuffy肿胀的.Hisshouldersslumped耷拉着./“Didn’tyousleeplastnight?Youlookshot筋疲力尽的.”,hismotherasked.

Theoldwomanontheparkbenchissad.

Theoldwomanontheparkbenchweptquietly.

Hecried.

Tearsofjoystreameddownhischeeks.

Mymomisoverprotective.

Mymomneverletsmevisitafriend’shouseun