Unit 1Friendship Lesson 4 Writing（课件） -2024-2025学年（沪教版）英语 七年级上册.pptxVIP

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(沪教版)七年级上册

Unit1

Friendship

Key

Writingapostaboutyourfriend

Prediction

Schoolofficialaccountplanstopostanarticleabout“Goodfriendsaroundus.WangYaosentaposttorecommendherbestfriendHanLi.Pleasepredictwhataspectswillbeincludedinthispost.

Han

Li

WangYao

2023/10/2019:09

Mybestfriend

HanLiismybestfriend.Sheis12yearsold.

HanLiistall.Shehaslong,straighthairandbig,darkeyes.Ithinksheislovely.Sheisgoodatdancingandlikesmoderndance.

HanLiisverykindandhelpful.WhenIneedhelp,sheis

alwaysthereforme.IcantrustherandIsharemythoughts

withher.IoftentellherhowIfeelaboutpeopleorthings.Itiswonderfultohavesuchagoodfriend.

Pre-writing

▶ReadandlabelthepartsofthepostwrittenbyWangYao.

Appearance

Personal

qualities

Basic

information

Hobbies

LikeReply

Pre-writing

▶ReadthepostwrittenbyWanBaaofordetails.Completethemindmapwithkeywords.sic

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While-writing

▶Writeyourpost.Focusonyourfriendspersonal

qualitiesinyourpost.

问题

是

否

如果为否如何改进

1.你在网贴中是否包含了对朋友不同方面的介绍(基

本信息、外貌、性格特质、爱好等)?

2.你在网贴中是否用了形容词，如

来描述好友的性格特质?

3.你在网贴中是否运用了本单元中学到的单词和短语

4.你的网贴在拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确?

Post-writing

▶Tickthecharttocheckyourwriting,andthenreviseit.

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评价指标

得分

评分标准

1.网贴是否包含了对朋友不同方面的介绍

(基本信息、外貌、性格特质、爱好等)?

5=Excellent

4=Good

3=Acceptable

2=Needs

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