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系列四不可不背的写作素材

Ⅰ.应用文写作高分表达

一、词汇升级

1.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.

→WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iconveyedmyappreciationtomyteacher.?

2.Wewillorganizeallkindsofactivities,includingperformancesontraditionalChinesemusicalinstruments,folkdancesandChinesemartialarts.

→Wewillorganizearangeof/avarietyofactivities,includingperformancesontraditionalChinesemusicalinstruments,folkdancesaswellasChinesemartialarts.?

3.It’llbeathirty-minuteride.Uponarrival,we’llfirstvisitafarm,wherewecanfeedchickensandpickstrawberries.

→It’llbeathirty-minuteride.Uponarrival,we’llfirstpayavisitto/dropinatafarm,wherewecanfeedchickensandpickstrawberries.?

4.Ifgiventhepreciousopportunity,IwilltrytopresentthecharmofChineseculture.

→Ifgiventhepreciousopportunity,IwillsparenoefforttopresentthecharmofChineseculture.?

5.I’mwritingtotellyousomethingabouthowwearrangethenextclass.

→I’mwritingtoinformyouofsomethingabouthowwearrangethenextclass.

6.ProfessorGreenisaproductivepoet,whoseworksareverypopular.

→ProfessorGreenisaproductivepoet,whoseworksenjoygreatpopularity.?

7.Mostimportantly,outgoingandenthusiastic,Ilikebeingavolunteer,providingservice.

→Mostimportantly,outgoingandenthusiastic,Iamkeenonbeingavolunteer,providingservice.?

8.IwouldliketocongratulateyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition.

→Iwouldliketoexpress/conveymycongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition.?

9.I’dappreciateit/begratefulifyoucouldletmeknowwhenyouarefreeinadvance.

→I’dappreciateit/begratefulifyoucouldletmeknowwhenyouareavailableinadvance.

10.KnowingthatyoulikeChinesepaper-cutting,Iamveryhappytoinviteyoutotakepartintheonlinelectureg