2024-2025汕头一模英语主观题评分细则.pdf

2024-2025汕头市普通高考第一次模拟考试

第三部分语言知识运用

第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

56.the;57.closely;58.shares;59.leaves;60.to;

61.how;62.and;63.toprotect;64.promoting;65.rescued

评分标准：单词拼写错误、形式错误或大小写出错均不给分

应用文评分细则

写作第一节（满分15分）

题目：

假定你是李华，针对校园常有学生受伤的现象，外教Allen要求学生分组完成一份校园生活急救手册。

请你代表小组写封邮件给Allen，内容包括：

1.汇报任务完成情况；

2.询问外教改进意见。

参考词汇：急救手册afirst-aidmanual

一、参考范文

范文一：

DearAllen,

Iamdelightedtoreporttheworkingprogressofthefirst-aidmanualdesignedbyourgroup.

Thefocusofourprojectissprains.Uptonow,wehavecollectedrelevantinformationaswellasdecidingthe

outline.Andweplantocreateaninstructionleafletthatincludesclearillustrationsofeachsteptohelpstudents

haveaclearpictureofhowtogivefirstaidcorrectly.Believingthere’sstillroomforimprovement,wesincerely

hopeyoucouldsparesometimetogothroughourfirstdraftintheattachmentandofferusguidancetomakeit

morecomprehensiveandpractical.

Thankyouforyourtime!Wearelookingforwardtoyouradvice.(114词）

Yours,

LiHua

范文二：

DearAllen,

IamLiHua,oneofthestudentsinyourclass.Onbehalfofourteam,Iamwritingtoreportourfirst-aid

manualtoyouandseekyourvaluableadviceonourwork.

Sofar,wehavefinishedthefirstversionofthefirst-aidmanual.Itistailoredtotheneedsofstudentson

campus,withvariouscommonsituationsrangingfromburnstoinsectbites.Tomakeitmoreaccessible,wehave

addedclearillustrationsandflowchartstoeachprocedure.Additionally,preventivemeasuresandalistof

emergencycontactnumbersareincluded.Couldyoukindlyreviewourworkattachedandsugge