读后续写写作训练--人与社会：环保主题“个体行动引发集体改变” --高考英语写作专题复习.docx

读后续写写作训练--人与社会：环保主题“个体行动引发集体改变”

读后续写

Astheschoolyearwrappedupandthefirstdaysofsummervacationstretchedoutbeforethem,Max,Ava,andSamhadaperfectdayplannedattheirusualcommunitypark.Thistidylittleparkwastheirgo-tospotforunwindingandjustenjoyingsomepreciousleisuretime.?

Maxrushedaheadwithasoccerballunderhis-arm,AvaandSamtrailingcloselybehind,fullofenergy.Itwasthekindofdaythatpromisedendlessfunandcarefreelaughter.Butastheysteppedintothepark,theirheartsank.Theonce-belovedplaygroundwasnowachaoticmessofdiscardedtrash(乱扔的垃圾)?—candywrappersstuckintheslide’smetalbars,plasticbottlesrollinginthewind,andchipbagslyingunderfoot.?

“Lookatthis!”Avashoutedindisbeliefasshepointedtothegarbageneartheswings.?

Max’sfacedarkenedwithfrustration.Thethreefriendsstoodfrozen,theireyesscanningtheplaygroundarea.Theoncecleanslidesandswingswerenowburiedunderalayerofcandywrappersandplasticbottles.Avacastaglance(瞥一眼)atthewalkingtrails,wheregarbageseemedtohavetakenover,withdiscardedbagsandcanslyingeverywhere.Samlookedoutatthegrassyfields—adisaster.Theparkwasvast,buteverycornerseemedtohavebeentouchedbythecarelessnessofothers.?

“Whowouldbesothoughtless?”Maxwhispered,shakinghishead.?

Samkickedaplasticbottleinanger,sendingitflyingacrossthegrass.“It’snotjustthoughtless—it’sdisrespectful.”

Avasighedthoughtfullybutsuddenlyherfacelitup.“Wecan’tjustleaveitlikethis.Whydon’twedosomethingaboutit?Wecan,say,formaCleanupSquad(清洁小分队)......”shesaid,hervoicesoftbutdetermined.?

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

MaxandSamexchangedanexcitedglance.?

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Unexpectedly,otherparkgoersjoinedinastheydidthecleanup.

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语篇解读

这篇故事的续写部分生动诠释了个体行动引发集体改变的环保主题，具体可从以下三个层面进行解读：

一、行动力的觉醒（个人层面）

当Ava提出清洁小分队的构想时，原本愤怒的三个孩子完成了从被动接受到主动承担的心理转变。Max将