高三英语写作专项之读后续写讲解课件.pptx

手把手教你写读后续写;读后续写的高考评分标准;读后续写

四个步骤;读后续写;“Susaninvitedustogotoherhouseafterschooltomorrow,”Hollysaidassoonasshearrivedfromschool.Fromhervoice,Isensedshewaspleasedwiththeinvitation.

Weweretravellingalongthewindingcountryroadthatledtoherhousethefollowingday.OnthewaySusantalkednervouslyaboutherfostermomandtheseventeencatstheyhadtakeninandcaredfor.

Whenwecametoastop,Susan’sfostermom—whointroducedherselfasGlenda—gaveusawarmwelcome.Susanguidedusthroughthehouse.Sheproudlyshowedusherroom,whichwasonlydecoratedwithsomeshabbyusedfurniture.

IfollowedSusan’sfostermom,Glenda,intothekitchen.Afterclearingasmallarea,Glendapoureduseachacupofblackcoffeewithhertremblinghand.Thenshebegantorelaxaswedrankourcoffeeandchattedabouthercats.

;HereyesshoneassheshowedherfondnessforSusan.Butherexpressionturnedbluewhenshereferredtothegirl’spast.Inaninstant,Icametorespectthiswarmheartedwomanwhohadopenedherhometoayoungergirlandtriedhardtomakeadifferenceinherlife.

注意：;;;;一。无灵主语:情绪名词+固定动词+sb+as/whensbdosth“当某人做某事时，一股。。。情绪涌上心头。‘

例句:Uncontrollably,awaveofregretwashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.

听到这个坏消息时，一股悔恨的情绪无法控制地涌上我心头。

;大卫继续跑步:Davidkeptonrunning.

(前加情绪形容词):大卫充满信心和决心，继续奔跑。

Confidentanddetemined,Davidkeptonrunning.

(后加非谓语/分动作)：大卫充满信心和决心，继续奔跑，奋力冲向终点线。

Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning,strugglingtoreachthefinishline.

(后加独立主格/五官):大卫充满信心和决心，继续奔跑，汗水顺着他的脸流下来。

Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning,sweatstreamingdownhisface.;;四。独立主格:身体部位+动词非谓语，sbdosth

Tearswellingupinsb’seyes/streamingdownsb’scheeks,sbdosth;(眼泪涌上来/流下脸颊)

Eyesglitteringwithjoy/relief,sbdosth(眼里闪着。。。);

Facegleamingwithdelight,Peter