高考英语写作专题复习：读后续写花瓶破碎故事 讲义 .docx

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Thesoundofglassbreakingisinstantlyrecognizable.IdbeentellingmybestfriendMissiasillystoryandhadspunaroundinthelivingroomwhenIheardthatsoundandfroze.

WhenIlookeddownatthecarpet,itwascoveredwithpiecesofsparklingred,pinkandclearglass.Missisaid,Oh,no,notthevase.

“Why?WhatdidIdo?”Myfacereddened

“Abby,thatglassvasewasoneofthefewitemsmyrelativesbroughtwhentheycameto

America,Missirepliednervously.Ifyoudbrokenanythingelseintheapartment,Iwouldve

gladlysaidIdidit.Butyouregoingtohavetotellmymomthatitwasyourfault,andshesgoingtobereallymad.

Iwasterrified.Iddestroyedapricelessfamilyheirloom(传家宝).WhydidIhavetospinaroundlikethat?

Wegathereduptheshatteredpieces.Ikeptsayingthatmaybeitcouldbefixed,butMissisaidgentlyitdidntlookpossible.Iinsistedwekeepthepieces.Theglasswassofragile,likea

colourful,swirlylightbulbhadexploded.Someofitbrokeevenmoreaswetriedtosweepitupcarefully.

Missisaidhermomwouldbehomebysix.Mystomachwasinknots.Wouldhermomyellatmeorpunishme?WouldshetellmeIcouldntstayintheirapartmentfortheweekend?Icouldntstopplayingthefifteensecondsoverinmymind,mespinningfastandthesoundofglass

crashing.TheonlythingIcouldthinkoftosaywasImsorry.

Acoupleofminutesaftersixweheardakeyturninthedoor.Hermomwashome.Right

fromthestart,wecouldseeshewasinagoodmood.Hello!Itshottoday.Iwanttotreatyou

girlstothatfrozenyogurtIknowyoulike,letsgo!hermomsaid.Shepointedattheopendoor.注意：(1)续写词数应为150个左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething.Isaid.

Hearingmyapology,Missismotherburstintolaughter.

花瓶破碎故事续写续写要点

第一段要点：细致描绘“我”承认错误时的细节，如声音颤抖、眼神闪躲、身体微微颤抖，突出紧张与害怕；描述Missi妈妈从最初的好心情到听到消息后的表情骤变，震惊、眼神凝固，以及走向客厅查看碎片时的动作，弯腰、轻轻触碰碎片，展现她对传家宝的珍视和此刻的复杂心情。

第二段要点：着重刻画Missi妈妈笑出声后的解释，强调