英文论文题名的编辑.pptVIP

词序不当问题*Mechanismofsuppressionofnontransmissiblepneumoniainmiceinducedbynewcastlediseasevirus1该题名的本意应是pneumoniawasinduced,而不是micewasinduced.因此,应表达为:2Suppressionmechanismofnontransmissiblepneumoniainducedinmicebynewcastlediseasevirus小鼠中新城病病毒诱导的非传染性肺炎的抑制机理30102PaleomagneticstudyonKucheDepressofTarimBlockinearlyCretaceousanditsinclinationshallowing塔里木地块库车坳陷早白垩世古地磁结果及磁倾角偏低的成因探讨EarlyCretaceouspaleomagneticresultsfromKucheDepression,TarimBlockandthecauseoftheirinclinationshallowingCommonimagingpointgathermigrationvelocitymodelingbasedonwaveequation波动方程法共成像点道集偏移速度建模01Mgrationvelocitymodelingforcommonimagingpointgathersbythewaveequationmethod02题名的句法(4):名词堆砌问题*Bad:FactorsinfluencingprimarylivercancerresectionsurvivalrateGood:FactorsinfluencingsurvivalrateafterresectionofprimarylivercancerBad:Nursingoftran-sphenoidremovalofpituitaryadenomas接受护理的应该是病人,而不是手术123Good:Nursingforpatientsaftertran-sphenoidremovalofpituitaryadenomas(垂体瘤横楔切除)4悬垂分词潜在的主语应是研究者,而不是研究对象题名的句法(5):悬垂修饰问题*Bad:Isolationofantigensfrommonkeysusingcomplement-fixationtechniques(猴子使用了补体结合技术?)Good:Usingcomplement-fixationtechniquesinisolationofantigensfrommonkeys(用补体结合技术从猴体分离抗体)Usingcomplement-fixationtechniquestoisolateantigensfrommonkeys题名的句法(6):介词问题*“××的××”,“的”=“of”或“for”： of—表示所有关系 for—表示目的、(方法的)用途Anestheticmanagementofcarotidsurgery(颈动脉外科中的麻醉处理of应修改为for) “空气中14C取样器”（采集空气中14C的取样器） Bad:14Csamplerinair(在空气中的14C取样器) Good:Asamplerfor14Cinair题名的句法:介词问题*Bad:LinearprogrammingmethodofoptimizationofsystemsofpartialdifferentialequationGood:Linearprogrammingmethodforoptimizationofpartialdifferentialequationsystems(…微分方程优化的线性…方法)题名的句法:介词问题*原名:Formulationofequationsofverticalmotionoffiniteelementformforvehicle-bridgeinteractionsy