预制菜之我见写作+讲义+-+安徽省蚌埠市A层高中高二下学期第四次联考英语试卷.docx

写作

近年来，预制菜逐渐走进人们的日常生活，引发了广泛讨论。你校英语报正在举办主题为“预制菜之我见”(MyViewsonPre-madeFood)的征文活动。请你结合自己的观察与思考写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.预制菜的优势；

2.预制菜的不足；

3.你对其未来发展的看法。

注意：

1．写作词数应为80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

一、文本主旨

这篇征文旨在围绕预制菜展开讨论。开篇点明预制菜走进日常生活这一背景，接着分别阐述预制菜在方便快捷、种类多样等方面的优势，以及在营养成分、口味等方面的不足，最后表明自己对预制菜未来发展的看法，比如在改进不足的基础上有望获得更广阔的市场等，让读者全面了解作者对预制菜的观点。

二、词汇积累

1.pre-madefood预制菜

2.advantage优势

3.shortcoming不足

4.development发展

5.convenience便利

6.nutrition营养

7.taste口味

三、佳句赏析

1.Pre-madefoodhasgraduallysteppedintopeoplesdailylifeinrecentyears.

简洁地引出预制菜走进人们生活这一背景，为后文论述做铺垫。

2.Pre-madefoodoffersgreatconvenienceasitsavesalotoftimeincooking.

清晰地阐述预制菜方便快捷的优势，“as”引导原因状语从句，解释方便的原因。

3.However,pre-madefoodmaylacksomenutrientscomparedwithfreshlycookedmeals.

用“However”转折，自然地引出预制菜的不足，“comparedwith”将预制菜与新鲜烹饪的饭菜进行对比，突出不足。

四、写作示范

示范1

MyViewsonPre-madeFood

Inrecentyears,pre-madefoodhasbecomeincreasinglypopularinpeoplesdailylife.

Pre-madefoodhasitsobviousadvantages.Firstly,itprovidesgreatconvenience.Peoplecansavealotoftimeoncooking,especiallyforthosewhoarebusywithwork.Secondly,thereisawidevarietyofpre-madefood,allowingpeopletohavedifferentchoices.

However,italsohassomeshortcomings.Thenutritioninpre-madefoodmaynotbeasbalancedasthatinfreshlycookedfood.Andsometimesthetastemaynotbeasgood.

Despitetheseproblems,Ibelievepre-madefoodwillhaveabrightfuture.Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,itsqualitycanbeimprovedtomeetpeoplesneedsbetter.

示范2

MyViewsonPre-madeFood

Thesedays,pre-madefoodhasgraduallyenteredourdailylives.

Theadvantagesofpre-madefoodareclear.Itsextremelyconvenient.Wecanquicklyprepareamealwithoutspendingmuchtimeoncutting,washingandcooking.Moreover,itcanbeagreatsolutionwhenwedonthave