04 看图作文-农业发展(作文深度赏析) .docx

看图写作——现象分析

农业发展（2021届金山一模）

请仔细阅读以下三幅图片《三代农夫》（ThreeGenerationsofFarmers）并完成写作。

在写作中，你必须：

1）简要描述三幅图片中的内容；

2）分析其背后所反映的现象及原因；

3)对你的启示。

一、框架梳理

图片描述

1.Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,wecanfindoutthat…

2.Asisvividlyshown/depicted/described/showninthepictures,…

3.Whatisvividlydepictedinthethreethought-provokingpicturesis…

4.Inthepast,…duringthetimesofourfathers,…while,intoday’ssociety,…

5.Thesethreepictures…,showingvividly…

分析现象

1.Thephenomenonshowsthat…

2.Thethought-provokingpictureindicatesthat…

3.Itisobviousfromthepicturethat…

4.Thesethreepictureshavereflectedaphenomenonthat…

5.Whatweshouldlearnfromthestoryisthat…

6.Thethreepicturesserveasanillustrationthat…

7.Fromthesepictures,theydorevealathought-provokingsocialphenomenon.

8.Whatthepicturereflectsis…

阐明原因

1.Thereareseveralreasonsaccountingforit.Firstly,…Secondly,…Lastbutnotleast,…

2.Thesechangesallgivecredittothescientificandtechnologicaladvance…

3.Whatmainlyaccountsforthisphenomenonisthat…

4.Oneobviousreasoncontributingtothisphenomenonis…,Besides,Furthermore,…

5.Themainreasonsbehindthesechangesare…

6.Inmyeyes,therearetworeasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon.Firstandforemost,…Besides,…

7.Apartfrom…,…isalsotobementioned.

表达启示

1.Inmyopinion,…

2.Asteenagers,whilebenefitingfromtheconvenienceoftechnologyinourdailylife,weshouldalso…

3.Throughthetruthreflectedbehindthepictures,Iamawarethat…

4.ThesepicturesaresostrikingthatIcan’thelpinferringthemessageconveyedbythem…

5.Fromallofthesediscussedabove,idrawtheconclusionsasfollows.

6.Whatweshouldlearnfromthestoryisthat…

7.Thethreepicturesarequiteinspiring,…

8.Takingtheabovereasonsintoaccount,Iamfirmlyconvincedthat…

二、正文部分语言汇总分析

对三代农业的描述

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