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Hearingthatourschoolnewspaperisgoingtoaddaspecificcolumntodiscusshelicopterparentsandsnowplowparents.I’dliketopresentsomeexamplesinmydailylifeandgivemyownopinionsonthesetwokindsofparents.

Helicopterparentsalwaysgiveexcessivecarefortheirchildrenandpayattentiontoallthedetailsinchildren’slife.Irememberthatoneofmyfriendsoncecomplainedtomethatshefounditimpossibletodothingswithoutthesupervisionofherparents.Althoughherparentssaidthatwhatevertheyhavedonewasinherbestinterest,shestillcouldn’tunderstandtheirbehavioratall.Actually,sheconsideredthatherparentswereinvadingherprivacyandfailedtogiveheranyspacetobeherself.

Whenitcomestosnowplowparents,franklyspeaking,nowadaysmanyparentstrytheirbesttoclearuptheobstaclesontheirwaytosuccess.Theymayholdthegroundthatsuccessmaybemoreeasilyaccessibletotheirchildreniftheysparenoefforttopaveasimplerandmorestraightwayfortheirchildren.

Frommyperspective,theseparents’behaviorsmayactuallydomoreharmthangoodtotheirchildren.Theytendtoimposetheirownideasontheirchildren,andtheexcessivecarefromtheseparentswilldrivetheirchildrenmad.Childrenmaybecomemoreanxiousandlosetheirdirectionoflifeundertheheavyburdenfromparents.What’smore,it’schildrenthemselvesthatarethemasteroftheirlife.Theyhavetoundergodifficultiesandhardshipsiftheywanttoseekforsuccess.Therefore,parentsshouldlearntogivemorespacetotheirchildrenandallowthemtoflyintheirskyinsteadofbeingconfinedtothelimitedspacerestrictedbytheparents.Inaddition,parentsandchildrenshouldcommunicatemoretostrengthentheemotionalbondandestablishabetterrelationshipbetweenthem.

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