05 建议类-图标作文(作文深度点评).docx

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建议类（图表）

写作话题：文华中学的读书节即将展开，学校将给每个班级配发图书（按下图显示的比例），放置在班级中，总量为20本。现在学校向学生们征求意见，假设你是该学校的学生李华，请你给学校写封邮件，描述提供的图书类型并谈谈你的意见与建议。（学科辅导类：test-prepbooks）

（浦东2020一模）

一、框架梳理

交代背景

Hearingthatourschoolwilldistribute20newbookstothereadingcornerineveryclassroom,I’mwritinginresponsetoyourdistributionplan.

Hearingthenewsthatourschoolisgoingtodistribute20booksinvolvingvariouskindsofbookstoeachclassasanactivityintheReadingFestival,I’dliketoputforwardmysuggestions.

HavingbeeninformedthattheReadingFestivalisscheduledtobeheldandyouareseekingforsuggestionsonthecategoryofbookstobeallocatedtoeveryclass,I’mwritingtooffermyopinionsandhopefullygivesomeadvice.

HavinglearntthattheReadingFestivalisaroundthecorner,andthattheschoolwilldistribute20bookstoeachclass,rangingfromcartoonstotest-prepbooks,Iamwritingtoputforwardmyownsuggestionsonthedistribution.

描述图表

注意：这里是柱状图，最好用(bar)chart。

（补充：饼图是piechart，表格是table，线形图是graph）

Asisclearlyindicatedinthechart,10test-prepbooksareprovided,followedbycomicbooks.Only15%ofnon-fictionbooksandamere5%ofliteraturebooksaredistributedtoeachclass.

Asisshowninthechart,amongallthebook,test-prepbooksaccountforthehighestpercentageat50%,followedbycomicbooksanddocumentarybookswiththeproportionof30%and15%respectivelywhileliteraturetakesuptheleastshareofamere5%.

Accordingtothebarchart,therewillbefourkindsofbooks,whicharecartoonbooks,non-fictionbooks,literaturebooksandtest-prepbookswiththeproportionof30%,15%,5%and50%respectively.

Asisplanned,foursortsofbooksaretobeincluded.Amongthem,test-prepbooksoccupy50%,withcomicbooks,nonfictionbooksandliteraturebooksaccountingfor30%,15%and5%respectively.

Asisshowninthebarchart,thetest-prepbooksaccountforhalfofallbooks,whichgetthebiggestshar