私家英语飞读后续写专题之捕捉和回应伏笔 教师版 黄丽飞.docx

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读后续写专题之捕捉和回应伏笔教师版Fairy

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Howtocaptureandechotheforeshadowing

Whatisforeshadowing？

伏笔是叙事类文本创作中描写、叙述的一种手法,指作者对将要在作品中出现的人物或事件预作提示或暗示,以求前后呼应,有助于全文达到结构严谨、情节发展合理、暗示点题和沟通内部联系的效果。读后续写要求续写内容和所给短文是一脉相承的，那么最好的方式就是呼应所给短文中的细节抓住可以呼应的细节。

Howtocaptureandechotheforeshadowing

1.Readthefirstparagraphandcatchtheforeshadowing

2.Readthethemeofthetextandcatchtheforeshadowing

3.Readthedetailsandcatchtheforeshadowing

4.Readthelastparagraphofthetextandcatchtheforeshadowing

5.Readthegivensentencesandcatchtheforeshadowing

真题案例

OneweekendinJuly,?Jane?andherhusband,?Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbya?lakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”and?walkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehad?climbed?toahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhere?atadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoa?stream.Tohergreatjoy,?shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldlead